for I'd Rather be Anti Social12/21/2007 c10 criti-sized
Forgive me if this review comes off very short, I've had a long day and my migraine isn't helping.
This chapter was very interesting, it had me laughing throughout most of it. Especially when it came to Chad. I can't see how people would think he's gay, he did have a thing for Joey's sister when he saw her, right.
But great chap.
C.S.
Forgive me if this review comes off very short, I've had a long day and my migraine isn't helping.
This chapter was very interesting, it had me laughing throughout most of it. Especially when it came to Chad. I can't see how people would think he's gay, he did have a thing for Joey's sister when he saw her, right.
But great chap.
C.S.
12/20/2007 c10 
1Zephyr-wings
LOL, this chapter was hysterical! Two thumbs way up! My foul mood turned around when I got the message that you uploaded. I love all of Joey’s comments. What’s best is that he didn’t even say one word in the chapter, hilarious. I don’t think he needs to worry about Chad thought. He may be scary but he seems harmless. If anything does happens, Joey could just feed him to his little sister. Hahaha, keep up the good work!
1Zephyr-wingsLOL, this chapter was hysterical! Two thumbs way up! My foul mood turned around when I got the message that you uploaded. I love all of Joey’s comments. What’s best is that he didn’t even say one word in the chapter, hilarious. I don’t think he needs to worry about Chad thought. He may be scary but he seems harmless. If anything does happens, Joey could just feed him to his little sister. Hahaha, keep up the good work!
10/10/2007 c2 InsanePhoenix
Hillarious, sorry I didnt get heree earlier I was really missing out...I love it already :D
Hillarious, sorry I didnt get heree earlier I was really missing out...I love it already :D
10/8/2007 c9 criti-sized
The fact that his father jumped from the top of the stes is quite humourous, it's definitely the opposite of my father, lol.
Lol, I'm not sure how Chad and the others found out where he lived. It's qite weird how they keep finding out these things about him without him giving them any details.
Of course his father would agree for him to go, but I wouldn't have expected Jesse to tell him also. And wow, a slight attraction between Chad and Jesse. O_O Then she told Chad to call her. That's another bad sign, if Chad does do that, he'll not only be going out with his sister, he'll have his phone number.
Lol! He pushed them out the house. I wouldn't have expected Joey to do that, but I guess the last straw was his sister.
Having Chad's POV is quite nice. I laughed for a long time when I read he brought his bike for two. You gotta give it to the guy, he's going out of his way to make friends with Joey. Though he's doing it the wrong way, it still counts for trying.
"I looked down at my purple bell bottom pants and my ruffled silk blouse." LMAO, oh, wow. I hope he borrowed those from his parents instead of buying them new.
From negative poplarity to running out of the house, Chad definitely has it made for him. Like I said before, hebrings a funnier air to the story. He could be stealing the attention from Joey as well. O_o. But Joey's too randomly funny.
Great chapter.
C.S.
The fact that his father jumped from the top of the stes is quite humourous, it's definitely the opposite of my father, lol.
Lol, I'm not sure how Chad and the others found out where he lived. It's qite weird how they keep finding out these things about him without him giving them any details.
Of course his father would agree for him to go, but I wouldn't have expected Jesse to tell him also. And wow, a slight attraction between Chad and Jesse. O_O Then she told Chad to call her. That's another bad sign, if Chad does do that, he'll not only be going out with his sister, he'll have his phone number.
Lol! He pushed them out the house. I wouldn't have expected Joey to do that, but I guess the last straw was his sister.
Having Chad's POV is quite nice. I laughed for a long time when I read he brought his bike for two. You gotta give it to the guy, he's going out of his way to make friends with Joey. Though he's doing it the wrong way, it still counts for trying.
"I looked down at my purple bell bottom pants and my ruffled silk blouse." LMAO, oh, wow. I hope he borrowed those from his parents instead of buying them new.
From negative poplarity to running out of the house, Chad definitely has it made for him. Like I said before, hebrings a funnier air to the story. He could be stealing the attention from Joey as well. O_o. But Joey's too randomly funny.
Great chapter.
C.S.
10/7/2007 c9 18Always Being Different
This chapter was alright, but not one of your best. Switching the POV character in the middle of a story is a very risky move and I don't think it worked here. I really wanted to see more of Joey's awkward social situations. It seems like your trying to remove Joey from the story and turn it into the Chad Story, when in all of the previous chapters, Chad seemed to be more of a villain. Not the type of villain that wears black capes and ties girls to railroad tracks, but a villain nonetheless. The chapter wasn't bad, I just hope that you get Joey back into the focus of the story again in the next chapter.
18Always Being DifferentThis chapter was alright, but not one of your best. Switching the POV character in the middle of a story is a very risky move and I don't think it worked here. I really wanted to see more of Joey's awkward social situations. It seems like your trying to remove Joey from the story and turn it into the Chad Story, when in all of the previous chapters, Chad seemed to be more of a villain. Not the type of villain that wears black capes and ties girls to railroad tracks, but a villain nonetheless. The chapter wasn't bad, I just hope that you get Joey back into the focus of the story again in the next chapter.
10/6/2007 c9 1Zephyr-wings
Ah-ha, so they did know his address. LOL, now his sister is going to invite Chad over. LMAO at Larry and Chad dancing the Boogie!
1Zephyr-wingsAh-ha, so they did know his address. LOL, now his sister is going to invite Chad over. LMAO at Larry and Chad dancing the Boogie!
9/10/2007 c8 criti-sized
I forgot to mention the part about Chad and Mr. Dirkson. But it's still messed up that Chad got beat up. He's annoying, but he brings most of the comic relief for most of the chapters that have passed.
And wow didn't his sister make the perfect reentry; talking about cutting her hair for squirrels... If that's not crzy, it's crazier.
Lol. the prank call was funny, it had me laughing for a long time, but that's the point of the story being in humor.
C.S.
I forgot to mention the part about Chad and Mr. Dirkson. But it's still messed up that Chad got beat up. He's annoying, but he brings most of the comic relief for most of the chapters that have passed.
And wow didn't his sister make the perfect reentry; talking about cutting her hair for squirrels... If that's not crzy, it's crazier.
Lol. the prank call was funny, it had me laughing for a long time, but that's the point of the story being in humor.
C.S.
9/10/2007 c7 criti-sized
Aww, it's not fair that he call Penelope a thing, it's not entirely her fault that he's going on the date with her. He should be mad at Chad mostly.
Lol, that's wrong how they offered to stand in the background to watch him incase she btries to rape him. If thos are real friends, I wouldn't know what are. Joke.
I could imagine that Penelope would be strong, she has to have a plus sign somewhere on the scale, and strength would be it. And Mr. Dirkson, another crazy person that gives readers a laugh.
When I saw he was arguing with Penelope, I thought that maybe he should've been a belated in school rather than a teacher.
C.S.
Aww, it's not fair that he call Penelope a thing, it's not entirely her fault that he's going on the date with her. He should be mad at Chad mostly.
Lol, that's wrong how they offered to stand in the background to watch him incase she btries to rape him. If thos are real friends, I wouldn't know what are. Joke.
I could imagine that Penelope would be strong, she has to have a plus sign somewhere on the scale, and strength would be it. And Mr. Dirkson, another crazy person that gives readers a laugh.
When I saw he was arguing with Penelope, I thought that maybe he should've been a belated in school rather than a teacher.
C.S.
9/10/2007 c6 criti-sized
For some odd reason I feel sort of sympathetic towards Penelope. She's ugly, annoying and has bad breath, but makes herself stand out more than she should... but I guess if she likes it, that's acceptable.
I've been trying to get around to my reviewing for forever and haven't been able to until now.
When I read about the party and how the leader girl said that Chad and the others couldn't be invited I thought who actually listens to that stuff in high school. When you have a party you're opening the door for everyone, whether you like it or not...
And though I'm kinda confused how Joey ended up in the gym with Chad and them, I'm just going to figure that they followed him, since they'd been doing that the entire day.
But it's fucked up that he got stuck with going on the date with her just so they could get the address, though it'll prove to be a hilarious date.
C.S.
For some odd reason I feel sort of sympathetic towards Penelope. She's ugly, annoying and has bad breath, but makes herself stand out more than she should... but I guess if she likes it, that's acceptable.
I've been trying to get around to my reviewing for forever and haven't been able to until now.
When I read about the party and how the leader girl said that Chad and the others couldn't be invited I thought who actually listens to that stuff in high school. When you have a party you're opening the door for everyone, whether you like it or not...
And though I'm kinda confused how Joey ended up in the gym with Chad and them, I'm just going to figure that they followed him, since they'd been doing that the entire day.
But it's fucked up that he got stuck with going on the date with her just so they could get the address, though it'll prove to be a hilarious date.
C.S.
9/4/2007 c8 Zephyr-wings
LOL so they already have Joey's phone number. I wonder how annoying it will be when they get a hold of his address? Oh I could only imagine it. Hilarious!
LOL so they already have Joey's phone number. I wonder how annoying it will be when they get a hold of his address? Oh I could only imagine it. Hilarious!
9/3/2007 c5 criti-sized
You know what Chad reminds me of? One of those people that you can't stand to be around, but somehow you get so used to them annoying you when when they stop you wonder what happened to them or if something is wrong. I'm don't know if you plan to have it that Joey gets used to Chad being around him moreso than the entire geek squad, but I kinda see that trend forming.
That was hilarious, it took Penelope to get Joey to actually say something to them. Lol, I don't blame him for not wanting to go with Penelope, a girl as ugly as you described her would probably only cause more trauma than help.
C.S.
You know what Chad reminds me of? One of those people that you can't stand to be around, but somehow you get so used to them annoying you when when they stop you wonder what happened to them or if something is wrong. I'm don't know if you plan to have it that Joey gets used to Chad being around him moreso than the entire geek squad, but I kinda see that trend forming.
That was hilarious, it took Penelope to get Joey to actually say something to them. Lol, I don't blame him for not wanting to go with Penelope, a girl as ugly as you described her would probably only cause more trauma than help.
C.S.