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8/9/2007 c1 40Jareth the Monk
Ah, its a short but sweet one. This doesn't have to be long to be graceful and poignant. Is this about someone you know personally? Some poems like this one seem not so much like it was a planned out, ongoing process, but rather like it was based on a real experience or a thought from someone's mind, then they remembered it the next day and got it all down before they forgot it again.

I guess most people look more at peace in their sleep (or dead, though I have been to a couple of funerals where the deceased had a look on their face as if a hundred hells were after them).

Anyway, I guess this review turned out longer than I thought it would, but I will at least try to return reviews for people who stumble onto my account and actually read my stuff.
7/27/2007 c1 6concerto49
I didn't really get it. Guess I feel a little confused too.

Like I get what's happening, but not so much the bigger picture.

I liked the bit about the eyes being closed when they were not.

It was cool. Anyhow. Cheers.

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