3/14/2008 c1 9InSilverShadows
Ah, the theatre! It's been long since I've ventured into such territory. :P Overall, I enjoyed it. It's well written and there's a sense of chemistry between them all making them believable. Elvira sounds a little like yourself. However, despite its juicy goodness, I'm left feeling a little cut off. I'd like to see a little more of it, more of the realization that this IS their last sleepover together. A little melodrama never hurt anyone. Of course, that's not to say that people don't deal with such things in life with humor, and good times, but... I don't really know how to word it. I think it's a good thing that I am left wanting more, but it feels a little unconcluded. You just have a few loose strings. :) Tie them up, and it'll be excellent.