11/7/2007 c7 Mary Cate
This was really good! (In fact, it's the first enjoyable thing I've read on this site!) Anyways, I saw it on a firend's faves and it looked good... and it was.
Wow, I really should come up with something better than 'good'... ah, well, forget me and my lack of grandiloquence, please update as soon as you can!
This was really good! (In fact, it's the first enjoyable thing I've read on this site!) Anyways, I saw it on a firend's faves and it looked good... and it was.
Wow, I really should come up with something better than 'good'... ah, well, forget me and my lack of grandiloquence, please update as soon as you can!
9/26/2007 c7 1MARK In TIME
Good story. Interesting characters - more development could be needed. Bad place to end chapter 7 though. You should take some time writing a full chapter.
Waiting for the next chappie,
Mark In Time
Good story. Interesting characters - more development could be needed. Bad place to end chapter 7 though. You should take some time writing a full chapter.
Waiting for the next chappie,
Mark In Time
8/5/2007 c6 not.a.spoiled.brat
oh my god! thats funny. i cant believe his car is stolen! poor him.well update soon!
oh my god! thats funny. i cant believe his car is stolen! poor him.well update soon!
8/2/2007 c5 not.a.spoiled.brat
oh my god.thats embarrassing! what delaney said.well hope u update son.please?
oh my god.thats embarrassing! what delaney said.well hope u update son.please?
8/2/2007 c5 XxUnLikelyAnGeLxX
haha.Callie's a TOASTER KILLER! lol. This story is really getting good!
haha.Callie's a TOASTER KILLER! lol. This story is really getting good!
8/1/2007 c4 Yebba22
This is a really good story. I can't wait to see what happens mext. It has great potential.
This is a really good story. I can't wait to see what happens mext. It has great potential.
7/31/2007 c3 icedfaerie
Great story! I really enjoyed reading it so far..and definitely can't wait until the next chapter!
Great story! I really enjoyed reading it so far..and definitely can't wait until the next chapter!