8/23/2007 c1 HJWG
WOAH it's great, this is the stuff poetry's made of
WOAH it's great, this is the stuff poetry's made of
8/9/2007 c1 19EmeraldsAndPearls33
I really like this! It seems like a funny scene from a movie, where the main character can't stop staring at a gap in a school administrator's teeth, and then the gap widens as the camera zooms in and the kid either passes out or wakes up screaming. :D But I also liked the double meaning of "the gap just got bigger". It's a gap in understanding and also one of those sleazy gaps like a car salesman has, and it just keeps getting bigger and more annoying as the guy keeps talking.
Um, backstory, please? I'm curious. :D
Thanks for another poem I can relate to!
Em ;)
I really like this! It seems like a funny scene from a movie, where the main character can't stop staring at a gap in a school administrator's teeth, and then the gap widens as the camera zooms in and the kid either passes out or wakes up screaming. :D But I also liked the double meaning of "the gap just got bigger". It's a gap in understanding and also one of those sleazy gaps like a car salesman has, and it just keeps getting bigger and more annoying as the guy keeps talking.
Um, backstory, please? I'm curious. :D
Thanks for another poem I can relate to!
Em ;)