for Scarred Souls1/16/2009 c1 
9HeroForTheLostCause
I think you should ut the new version on Fiction Press anyway, or an old version.
9HeroForTheLostCauseI think you should ut the new version on Fiction Press anyway, or an old version.
9/5/2008 c6 19postcards from italy
Hi. I thought I'd stop by here and tell you how amazing your stories are... they're pretty amazing. I love them all.
Your stories nearly flawless, which is so cool, except for one thing:
“No, I weren’t,” Josh said, rolling his eyes. “The rooftop is the only place in this school that offers some privacy, but being with Damian isn’t all that bad. He’s pretty quiet, doesn’t talk all that much.”
I think, just think :), weren't should be "wasn't"
keep writing!
19postcards from italyHi. I thought I'd stop by here and tell you how amazing your stories are... they're pretty amazing. I love them all.
Your stories nearly flawless, which is so cool, except for one thing:
“No, I weren’t,” Josh said, rolling his eyes. “The rooftop is the only place in this school that offers some privacy, but being with Damian isn’t all that bad. He’s pretty quiet, doesn’t talk all that much.”
I think, just think :), weren't should be "wasn't"
keep writing!
8/22/2008 c27 23firestar267
I am sorry to hear that! But i read your profile and the announcement on it and I understand why :) Does that mean that whilst you wont be updating on here, you continue to write and post your stories on your forum? I will join when i have time too :) good luck with everything :) xx
23firestar267I am sorry to hear that! But i read your profile and the announcement on it and I understand why :) Does that mean that whilst you wont be updating on here, you continue to write and post your stories on your forum? I will join when i have time too :) good luck with everything :) xx
4/23/2008 c26 Scribbles Go On Forever
okie! As long as you're rewriting it. I think you should wait until you're ready to post them.
okie! As long as you're rewriting it. I think you should wait until you're ready to post them.
4/19/2008 c26 sasuke-naruto-forever
Nu I love this story! T~T *goes all emo*
Of course you better post it when you get it all ready and done! I really really wanna read the new one! This one was way to awesome so the newer one will be even better!
Nu I love this story! T~T *goes all emo*
Of course you better post it when you get it all ready and done! I really really wanna read the new one! This one was way to awesome so the newer one will be even better!
4/19/2008 c26 1kurstinhartsyou
I was wondering why you hadn't updated in a while.
When I saw that you were discontinuing I was disappointed.
But then I saw that you were rewriting and I was like YES!
Haha, I can't wait to read it.
I think you should put it up when you're prepared to.
:]
Can't wait.
1kurstinhartsyouI was wondering why you hadn't updated in a while.
When I saw that you were discontinuing I was disappointed.
But then I saw that you were rewriting and I was like YES!
Haha, I can't wait to read it.
I think you should put it up when you're prepared to.
:]
Can't wait.
2/20/2008 c25 The Intelligent Designer
I just found this while searching around FP, and I'm so glad I did. I've spent every spare moment for the past 2 days trying to catch up in the story. It's so utterly amazingly superly spectacularly perfect that I can't begin to describe it. The characters are so...tragic. It hurts to read about their awful lives, but it's addicting, I have to admit. My favorites are definitely Josh and Damian. I can't decide between the two, because I love them both. This is written at a high level, lots of goody good 3 point vocabulary words, and it's also grammatically correct. I'm not gonna rant any further, because while I know that reviews are inspiring and whatnot, this is a bit much...but Scarred Souls deserves it, and so do you for the masterpiece...wow, I sound retarded...
I just found this while searching around FP, and I'm so glad I did. I've spent every spare moment for the past 2 days trying to catch up in the story. It's so utterly amazingly superly spectacularly perfect that I can't begin to describe it. The characters are so...tragic. It hurts to read about their awful lives, but it's addicting, I have to admit. My favorites are definitely Josh and Damian. I can't decide between the two, because I love them both. This is written at a high level, lots of goody good 3 point vocabulary words, and it's also grammatically correct. I'm not gonna rant any further, because while I know that reviews are inspiring and whatnot, this is a bit much...but Scarred Souls deserves it, and so do you for the masterpiece...wow, I sound retarded...
2/16/2008 c25 11My Chemical Music Box
omg YAY! NEW CHARACTERS!
I love new characters. And I love THESE new characters because they're goth-y and green-hair-y! lol
Update Soon!
11My Chemical Music Boxomg YAY! NEW CHARACTERS!
I love new characters. And I love THESE new characters because they're goth-y and green-hair-y! lol
Update Soon!
2/16/2008 c25 3portabellaprincess
Can't wait to meet the new characters and find out more about Madison and Wynn. Poor Chad.
3portabellaprincessCan't wait to meet the new characters and find out more about Madison and Wynn. Poor Chad.
2/16/2008 c25 5boyzarecrazy24
=] awe. that was a very tender chapter ^^ hehe that was sweet and sad and perfect lol
i really like the character development and the emotions that you display ubberdoober welyishly! =D hehe awseomse
10/10
update sooners!
xoxoxo
5boyzarecrazy24=] awe. that was a very tender chapter ^^ hehe that was sweet and sad and perfect lol
i really like the character development and the emotions that you display ubberdoober welyishly! =D hehe awseomse
10/10
update sooners!
xoxoxo
2/16/2008 c25 1kurstinhartsyou
Ah, I hope Madison continues to be in the story.
I like him, although he was stupid to go with Andrew.
But he needed the money you know?
Is he still gonna be in the story though?
I'm happy for Josh though, although now it's Chad's life that's falling apart as Josh's life is mending.
Spencer and Lesley will still remain my favorite couple though.
I can't wait for the next update.
I hope there's more Madison in it.
:]
1kurstinhartsyouAh, I hope Madison continues to be in the story.
I like him, although he was stupid to go with Andrew.
But he needed the money you know?
Is he still gonna be in the story though?
I'm happy for Josh though, although now it's Chad's life that's falling apart as Josh's life is mending.
Spencer and Lesley will still remain my favorite couple though.
I can't wait for the next update.
I hope there's more Madison in it.
:]
2/14/2008 c24 1Miss.Me So HAHA
Sorry I havent reveiwed in for ever. :\
I just read the whole story over again.
And I still love the whole thingWith every chapter your writing has gotten better and better.
:]
1Miss.Me So HAHASorry I havent reveiwed in for ever. :\
I just read the whole story over again.
And I still love the whole thingWith every chapter your writing has gotten better and better.
:]