
5/11/2014 c19 Margo
Laura i really liked it. No, not like, it's love! Janjanjan haha i make stories too but I'm too shy to publish it. Hope it will get good reviews just like yours. Love you Laura! 3 frm your #1 fan
Laura i really liked it. No, not like, it's love! Janjanjan haha i make stories too but I'm too shy to publish it. Hope it will get good reviews just like yours. Love you Laura! 3 frm your #1 fan
5/10/2014 c7 Margo
Nice. I've really got a thing for vampires and this story is totally BAZOOBZ hahaha that means awesome in my language. Keep writing these 'bazoobz' stories girl, I'm your #1 fan. _-b
Nice. I've really got a thing for vampires and this story is totally BAZOOBZ hahaha that means awesome in my language. Keep writing these 'bazoobz' stories girl, I'm your #1 fan. _-b
4/9/2014 c19 T
I was really enjoying it up until the end. Its got nothing to do with whether I liked the direction the ending went or not but more that it felt very rushed. Just too much seemed to happen in so few pages, I didn't really get time to process things and then the reconciliation felt far too abrupt.
I actually really enjoyed the story despite what my comment above might imply. Laughed out loud quite a few times and got really drawn into the characters.
Thanks for sharing :D
I was really enjoying it up until the end. Its got nothing to do with whether I liked the direction the ending went or not but more that it felt very rushed. Just too much seemed to happen in so few pages, I didn't really get time to process things and then the reconciliation felt far too abrupt.
I actually really enjoyed the story despite what my comment above might imply. Laughed out loud quite a few times and got really drawn into the characters.
Thanks for sharing :D
1/30/2013 c19
2OhMyPeanut
Loved the story! All though, I thought the end was very abrupt! Good Job, Enjoyed it!

Loved the story! All though, I thought the end was very abrupt! Good Job, Enjoyed it!
10/1/2012 c1 InkedGirl
Sounds interesting so far. I usually don't read vampire stories but this sounds different than Twilight. I like Lucian's character.
Sounds interesting so far. I usually don't read vampire stories but this sounds different than Twilight. I like Lucian's character.
8/6/2012 c18 Preposterous
I love how this isn't a pure happy or pure tragic ending. It's bittersweet, with an emphasis on the sweet part. I really enjoyed reading it.
I love how this isn't a pure happy or pure tragic ending. It's bittersweet, with an emphasis on the sweet part. I really enjoyed reading it.
8/6/2012 c7 Preposterous
I really like this story. It's not the typical Twilight-esque vampire romance, and the mute thing is a fun twist.
I really like this story. It's not the typical Twilight-esque vampire romance, and the mute thing is a fun twist.
6/26/2012 c19 Harvey the Wonder Hamster
Congradulations on getting it published. Good luck but you won't need it.
Congradulations on getting it published. Good luck but you won't need it.
6/19/2012 c18 Annalyn
Okay, I really, really liked this book. I'm so glad I found it! I liked reading Lucian's point of view, and I was shocked when I found out Lisa had betrayed him. Then, of course, I was relieved to see them work it out.
I found you through your comic on Smackjeeves. I didn't realize until going to your website that your storytelling abilities go far beyond one medium. Again, great story!
Okay, I really, really liked this book. I'm so glad I found it! I liked reading Lucian's point of view, and I was shocked when I found out Lisa had betrayed him. Then, of course, I was relieved to see them work it out.
I found you through your comic on Smackjeeves. I didn't realize until going to your website that your storytelling abilities go far beyond one medium. Again, great story!
2/17/2012 c18 Naty X-X
Great story! I loved, even when I found out that Lisa was with the bad guys.
The only thing I didnt like was Lucian forgiving her. I was really pissed of with her for choosing her friend and not him.
Anyway, I loved your work.
Great story! I loved, even when I found out that Lisa was with the bad guys.
The only thing I didnt like was Lucian forgiving her. I was really pissed of with her for choosing her friend and not him.
Anyway, I loved your work.
5/3/2011 c13 sweetpea265
Cool story. I'm wondering if the Red Generation was some kind of vampire assassin experiment gone wrong or something...Or maybe Lucian was the one who killed his parents and can't remember... There's so many places this story can go. Can't wait to read the rest. Pretty neat website by the way. I liked the graphic novel on there, but you left me hanging.
Cool story. I'm wondering if the Red Generation was some kind of vampire assassin experiment gone wrong or something...Or maybe Lucian was the one who killed his parents and can't remember... There's so many places this story can go. Can't wait to read the rest. Pretty neat website by the way. I liked the graphic novel on there, but you left me hanging.
4/20/2011 c18 Urelatable
Uh... Well that was unexpected...
Uh... Well that was unexpected...