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8/3/2008 c1 20The Wandering Musician
This is very interesting. I'm not entirely sure what it means, except that there seems to be someone leaving someone else. I loved the part about the ships.

The punctuation seemed a little strange to me, and I wasn't sure if you intended it to be so. I thought the lines "It's all about;" and "She pointed to;" should end with colons (:) rather than semi-colons.

Anyways, great job! The imagery is beautiful!

~Daughter of the Faeries

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