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6/5/2008 c1 10shadow-walker2633
Wow this is good. I like this a lot, and thats saying something.(:
5/21/2008 c1 sorryaboutthelight
i liked it- i'm big on the whole silent tears kind of poems. and i love the ideas- you've inspired me to write something now lol.
1/25/2008 c1 7Rooster Skull
Very short, yet very sweet. I loved it, and I like the idea of crying stars. It's beautiful.
7/31/2007 c1 half-sketched.staccatos
konnichi wa

How tormenting... It's the saddest, most poetic thing to hear about a "crying star." I always loved that sort of personification - stars are so beautiful. Lovely poem.

Zaijen

-Shan-
7/31/2007 c1 60xfail
This is quite good, although the last line doesn't seem to end it in as satisfying a manner as adding anotherfew lines could have. It's all up to you though.
7/31/2007 c1 Her Wishing Well
I dont normally like poems that rhyme but you made this work really well, i loved the imagery, well done.

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