for Unwanted Adventure11/17/2008 c2 
16dreamer999
Now this has yelling...the other chapter was funnier but this one's funny too but it's so swet because of how roido was so nice to emma, so cute! Tears of a believer(marsy) told me about this fic, I gotta thank her for telling me about this and thank you for writing this.
And I see that your fic has only 11 reviews and I can't believe it!
You should go join the RG(Oh totally shameless advertising T_T)
it's a forum where you can review to get reviewed! Read the rules first, you never know when the mods are pissy and they yell hehehe.
16dreamer999Now this has yelling...the other chapter was funnier but this one's funny too but it's so swet because of how roido was so nice to emma, so cute! Tears of a believer(marsy) told me about this fic, I gotta thank her for telling me about this and thank you for writing this.
And I see that your fic has only 11 reviews and I can't believe it!
You should go join the RG(Oh totally shameless advertising T_T)
it's a forum where you can review to get reviewed! Read the rules first, you never know when the mods are pissy and they yell hehehe.
11/15/2008 c1 16dreamer999
Wow, this is interesting and funny.
It is quite logical without yelling and shouting characters but with normal things in some schools that's funny hehehe.
The best thing is the main character's friends and the kind of trouble and I can't wait to read more.
WHAT COULD THAT LIGHT BE?
...ALIENS!...I guess...
16dreamer999Wow, this is interesting and funny.
It is quite logical without yelling and shouting characters but with normal things in some schools that's funny hehehe.
The best thing is the main character's friends and the kind of trouble and I can't wait to read more.
WHAT COULD THAT LIGHT BE?
...ALIENS!...I guess...
11/15/2008 c5 4MarsMonster
Oh my god...this is the funniest freaking thing I've ever read.
“Ha! Ha! You’ve got food on your cape!”
“I don’t care! I’m going to kill you no matter what you throw at me!”
I swear I laughed for like, five minutes. My sister was staring at me...O.o
:D
4MarsMonsterOh my god...this is the funniest freaking thing I've ever read.
“Ha! Ha! You’ve got food on your cape!”
“I don’t care! I’m going to kill you no matter what you throw at me!”
I swear I laughed for like, five minutes. My sister was staring at me...O.o
:D
7/9/2008 c46 10Rowen Annaliese
I like this story...and don't even read Mr. McMacMe's review. It's not your fault that they have the attention span of a goldfish lol And if they wanted you to stop writing stories then they obviously need to get off a site that is about writing..but enough about that. Good job. I like it and keep on writing! And now I'm off to read the sequel, or parts of it since it's not finished yet... :)
10Rowen AnnalieseI like this story...and don't even read Mr. McMacMe's review. It's not your fault that they have the attention span of a goldfish lol And if they wanted you to stop writing stories then they obviously need to get off a site that is about writing..but enough about that. Good job. I like it and keep on writing! And now I'm off to read the sequel, or parts of it since it's not finished yet... :)
6/23/2008 c2 12Mr. McMacMe
get a life! i didnt even have the attention span to read the chapter. So get a life join a club or try a sport or something. just stop writing stories!
12Mr. McMacMeget a life! i didnt even have the attention span to read the chapter. So get a life join a club or try a sport or something. just stop writing stories!
6/13/2008 c31 2CelticLady
Okay so this might sound a little random, but i noticed you only had five reviews and i think people must be crazy because this story is really good, it has everything humor, adventure, and a little romance! So yeah I like it! Sorry about the rambling
2CelticLadyOkay so this might sound a little random, but i noticed you only had five reviews and i think people must be crazy because this story is really good, it has everything humor, adventure, and a little romance! So yeah I like it! Sorry about the rambling
5/31/2008 c47 1Da.ChiicK.Fr0m.H3LL
awesome! D i love that story but i'm sad about emma leaving =( BTW one of the characters in a story i write is named Tay =)
1Da.ChiicK.Fr0m.H3LLawesome! D i love that story but i'm sad about emma leaving =( BTW one of the characters in a story i write is named Tay =)
8/7/2007 c19 5ShyFoxie
It's a likeable story so far (it kind of reminds me of Inu Yasha for some reason though. No resemblance to it at all, though), but could you have put out these chapters a little more gradually next time? It's great that you wrote all this, but I don't have time to read fast enough to keep up with it. My inbox was filled with story alerts up to chapter 40-something just a few days after I read the first chapter. Putting a whole bunch of chapters all out at once is more likely to scare people off from reading the whole thing than if you released seven or fewer per week.
5ShyFoxieIt's a likeable story so far (it kind of reminds me of Inu Yasha for some reason though. No resemblance to it at all, though), but could you have put out these chapters a little more gradually next time? It's great that you wrote all this, but I don't have time to read fast enough to keep up with it. My inbox was filled with story alerts up to chapter 40-something just a few days after I read the first chapter. Putting a whole bunch of chapters all out at once is more likely to scare people off from reading the whole thing than if you released seven or fewer per week.
7/31/2007 c2 5ShyFoxie
I like this story. It's funny and, even though the plot so far seems similar to a lot of other ones, it seems pretty original. I've read chapter one and two so far, but I have to go right now, so I'll do chp 3 later.
I loved the part where she had the King and herself both confused.
5ShyFoxieI like this story. It's funny and, even though the plot so far seems similar to a lot of other ones, it seems pretty original. I've read chapter one and two so far, but I have to go right now, so I'll do chp 3 later.
I loved the part where she had the King and herself both confused.