9/2/2009 c1 14Forbidden Smiles
I would love to see the next chapter for this.

7/27/2008 c1 a fan
OMG, this is so good! I like the change of pace, and I find it quite intresting. Please do continue with this story, if not for me, then for the other patrons who would read it in the time to come.

5/9/2008 c2 The Bloody Sponge
Hello there. I read the story "Ghost Writer" and your story here was credited as inspiration, or what have you.

Very unique perspectives comparing your work to that of your friend. While Hale cannot really feel the killer/interact personally (supposing it's not Hale) - Blaine has become his puppet.

I'm very saddened to read that you have put this one on hiatus. It would have been interesting to have read both alternate versions.

I do congratulate you for an EXCELLENT villain and graphic, vivid descriptions.

You made me want to vomit - just like Blaine.

That is a compliment.

I do hope that someday you will pick this up again.

3/12/2008 c2 11candid
Is this the stalker story you were telling me about? In any case, I LOVED this. It kind of reminded me of a James Patterson novel. The killer has that same realistic edge that makes you cringe backwards in horror, but, at the same time, lean forward in fascination. I really like the way you portray him, and how he isn't interested in sex (like SO many of the other stalkers on this site are *cough* xDD)

[You better pray, Blaine. I'm already aroused.] This line really creeped me out. Is he a sadist? He gets off on hurting people? That seems to add a new level of horror - he doesn't need to be forced into harming people if it's something he enjoys doing.

I picture him as having a very smooth, almost seductive voice, in contrast to his looks.

[Think of this as a chain letter.] Ironic. Chain letters always threaten death (e.g. if you don't post this in the next five minutes, a dead girl will come to your house and kill your first born at 3am tomorrow), but this one's actually true. Or, in any case, I certainly perceive it to be true.

[Blaine heard the clank of metal, and then a chilling noise that made him cringe; the sharpening of some metal object- most likely, a blade.] I love this line. I can almost hear the shriek of steel. 10x worse than nails on a chalkboard, I bet.

And I like the killer's sense of humor. It's very dry.

["If I point a gun at a pretty young lady like yourself, obviously, I plan to hurt you."] and ["If I'm threatening to kill you and want to go for a ride, then obviously I want something. Isn't that self-explanatory?"]

He's so remarkably witty. If he wasn't a psychopath, I think I'd love him. It's also kind of cool that you didn't make him drop dead gorgeous. He sounds truly horrific.

I notice you categorized this under romance. Is it going to be a Blaine x Nadiya pairing - or is Nadiya going to develop affections for this horribly twisted man? How does he know her? In any case, I definitely think you should update!

xCandid

9/3/2007 c2 6MizSphinx
it's all cool...its 11.21am and to go and translate that spanish u wrote is alot of horrors...so i'll just allow myself to be confused until tomorrow...again: great fic...you write well...descriptions are very good...kk...i'll shut up now...too sleepy...BUT...UPDATE SOON! :)

-MizSphinx

9/3/2007 c2 Blue Devil012
Wow, that was so intense! I can't believe he almost lost the numbers! XD I would be freaking out too, bleh. Please update soon!

8/4/2007 c1 Phai
Dange! Keep writing, I am riveted.

8/3/2007 c1 Blue Devil012
This is so interesting! Please continue!