for Thoughts and Thinking10/22/2010 c1 M. Knepper
Who is this? I just got the review for my story... dude, you're like three years late. Anyway, I'll kindly review your own work because I'm such a great guy.
"Cuz" is not a word.
"dont" is actually "don't", or "Don't" at the beginning of a sentence.
Capitalizing something does not make you cool and it's very unprofessional.
Finally, it's very mediocre and overdone.
I'd highly recommend working on your grammar, even though this is is old as crap.
Who is this? I just got the review for my story... dude, you're like three years late. Anyway, I'll kindly review your own work because I'm such a great guy.
"Cuz" is not a word.
"dont" is actually "don't", or "Don't" at the beginning of a sentence.
Capitalizing something does not make you cool and it's very unprofessional.
Finally, it's very mediocre and overdone.
I'd highly recommend working on your grammar, even though this is is old as crap.