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11/17/2007 c1 9Sally Can Wait
I thought the bunched up thing was a fitting feel for this piece. Being not a big fan of alcohol, I think you made a good point. It wasn't preaching against it, or anything. Good job. :D

-Sally
8/11/2007 c1 6concerto49
Felt it hard to read all bunched in a paragraph. Could have used some spacing.

Hm yes, alcohol does create many problems, but I think the main issue is that it is being abused. In that sense anything can create problems.

Cool. Anyhow. Cheers.

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