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3Kristina Suko
Hoy. Yeah. For a minute, I panicked, 'cause I thought this was the last chapter. But then I checked and went *phew*. I still like it.
~M
3Kristina SukoHoy. Yeah. For a minute, I panicked, 'cause I thought this was the last chapter. But then I checked and went *phew*. I still like it.
~M
9/5/2007 c4 Kristina Suko
"You’re so stupid and strange and annoying, and I’m going to miss you a lot.”
Great line.
I like Madeliene. She's very amusing and quite adorable. And loveable.
"You’re so stupid and strange and annoying, and I’m going to miss you a lot.”
Great line.
I like Madeliene. She's very amusing and quite adorable. And loveable.
9/5/2007 c1 Kristina Suko
He sounds very cute. Great first chapter! You got me hooked. :)
~Maranwe Telrunya
He sounds very cute. Great first chapter! You got me hooked. :)
~Maranwe Telrunya
9/3/2007 c7 Nadinerdrgz
well thats good you survived it you know school is not fun well some times but do your thing and i think the end of the story is good is so sweet i love it ^_^
well thats good you survived it you know school is not fun well some times but do your thing and i think the end of the story is good is so sweet i love it ^_^
9/2/2007 c7 8duckliy543
wow
you are such a gifted Writer.
yaayyayyay
are you planing an epilouge?
casue your story was amazing
great job!
8duckliy543wow
you are such a gifted Writer.
yaayyayyay
are you planing an epilouge?
casue your story was amazing
great job!
9/2/2007 c7 Lucy-the-bookworm
This was great. It was really easy to get into and I couldn't help smiling in the end. Great work!
This was great. It was really easy to get into and I couldn't help smiling in the end. Great work!
9/2/2007 c7 3starlit x sky
Oh wow. I loved that chapter. I loved the whole amazing, brilliant story! It was great to read and review this. =]
3starlit x skyOh wow. I loved that chapter. I loved the whole amazing, brilliant story! It was great to read and review this. =]
9/1/2007 c7 3oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE
OH.MY.GOD...
AW
THAT WAS SO CUTE!AW
...okay now that thats over...lol XD
i loved this chapter even more than the other this one takes the cake!
and you dont have to thank me for reviewin every chapter you're and awesome writer and you and your stories deserve a shout out! lol XD...but seriously you really are good and soo is this story and running away
i think that if you sent your stories to a publishing company you would be verry rich and famous(sp?) and i would buy everyone of your book! lol
well cant wait for more of your stories!
LOVE CHOCOLATE!
3oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATEOH.MY.GOD...
AW
THAT WAS SO CUTE!AW
...okay now that thats over...lol XD
i loved this chapter even more than the other this one takes the cake!
and you dont have to thank me for reviewin every chapter you're and awesome writer and you and your stories deserve a shout out! lol XD...but seriously you really are good and soo is this story and running away
i think that if you sent your stories to a publishing company you would be verry rich and famous(sp?) and i would buy everyone of your book! lol
well cant wait for more of your stories!
LOVE CHOCOLATE!
9/1/2007 c7 19ihrtbks
AW! I like how you showed them as adults with jobs and high-schoolers. The progression was very smooth. And this last chapter's just *angelic choir*. The last sentence was adorable-Ethan Pierce would give me happily ever after, and he would be the only one that ever could. You have to make a sequel with the kids or something!
*CLAPS*
19ihrtbksAW! I like how you showed them as adults with jobs and high-schoolers. The progression was very smooth. And this last chapter's just *angelic choir*. The last sentence was adorable-Ethan Pierce would give me happily ever after, and he would be the only one that ever could. You have to make a sequel with the kids or something!
*CLAPS*
9/1/2007 c7 5Arctic Wolf
To equal your randomness, I like wolves too... aka my pen-name. lol. Anyways... *sniffle*... what a great ending. Honestly, that was very cute. It kinda reminds me of my friend, the part where she reaches over the table and puts her hands on his cheeks. lol. Very adorable. Well, I can't wait to see what else you write. Keep in touch. AND Keep writing.
5Arctic WolfTo equal your randomness, I like wolves too... aka my pen-name. lol. Anyways... *sniffle*... what a great ending. Honestly, that was very cute. It kinda reminds me of my friend, the part where she reaches over the table and puts her hands on his cheeks. lol. Very adorable. Well, I can't wait to see what else you write. Keep in touch. AND Keep writing.
8/27/2007 c6 Nadinerdrgz
aw that was so sad i hope he go back and they talk or something but i liked it just a lil sad but is good tho keep it up so how was your 1st day at school hope it was oh ok
aw that was so sad i hope he go back and they talk or something but i liked it just a lil sad but is good tho keep it up so how was your 1st day at school hope it was oh ok