
8/13/2007 c4
5Arctic Wolf
man, I really want to know what happens next! lol. I felt so special when you put my praise in... haha... the whole style thing. lol. but this chapter was good. keep it up! :D

man, I really want to know what happens next! lol. I felt so special when you put my praise in... haha... the whole style thing. lol. but this chapter was good. keep it up! :D
8/7/2007 c3
3oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE
AAW... that was so cute! i loved it this chapter was adorable, well that is if a chapter can be adorable... well THANKS! im happy to be one of your fav. people! and as i said before a review for each chapter from me!. this was so...ugh there are not enough synonyms to describe how cute this chapter was... it was awesome.. cant wait for more even though you updated yesterday!
love CHOCOLATE!

AAW... that was so cute! i loved it this chapter was adorable, well that is if a chapter can be adorable... well THANKS! im happy to be one of your fav. people! and as i said before a review for each chapter from me!. this was so...ugh there are not enough synonyms to describe how cute this chapter was... it was awesome.. cant wait for more even though you updated yesterday!
love CHOCOLATE!
8/7/2007 c3
5Arctic Wolf
So, I'm not quite sure if I've sent you a review before. I'm kinda spacing. lol... anyways, on to the review. You're writing an amazing story. I'm hooked. At first I thought this chapter was a bit jumpy because there wasn't anything about the funeral, but that was cleared up. I'm not gonna critique because this is a different style of writing that I'm used to... but I think it's really good. So keep up the good work and I can't wait for another chapter. :D

So, I'm not quite sure if I've sent you a review before. I'm kinda spacing. lol... anyways, on to the review. You're writing an amazing story. I'm hooked. At first I thought this chapter was a bit jumpy because there wasn't anything about the funeral, but that was cleared up. I'm not gonna critique because this is a different style of writing that I'm used to... but I think it's really good. So keep up the good work and I can't wait for another chapter. :D
8/4/2007 c2
3oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE
THANK,THANK YOU VERY MUCH! ::bows down:: LOL XD
i like this chapter its funny! she threw a can at him...HAHAHAHAAHAHAA! i really like her. im not used to stories that keep jumping but its still good and you can expect a review from in EVERY chapter. i really do like your stories and you are an AMAZING writer. i have other pleople in my fav. authors but you were the first to make it there! soo yeah like i said before AWESOME story, and i cant wait for an update!
LOVE CHOCOLATE!

THANK,THANK YOU VERY MUCH! ::bows down:: LOL XD
i like this chapter its funny! she threw a can at him...HAHAHAHAAHAHAA! i really like her. im not used to stories that keep jumping but its still good and you can expect a review from in EVERY chapter. i really do like your stories and you are an AMAZING writer. i have other pleople in my fav. authors but you were the first to make it there! soo yeah like i said before AWESOME story, and i cant wait for an update!
LOVE CHOCOLATE!
8/3/2007 c1 oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE
HEYY! ITS ME!
this story is cool l i like it. gotta say, i LOVE her sarcasm! shes funny and hes arogant so... LOL XD well i hope you update soon and that you update running away soon too! like i said this is VER VERY GOOD! and amusing! lol
cant wait for more
love CHOCOLATE
HEYY! ITS ME!
this story is cool l i like it. gotta say, i LOVE her sarcasm! shes funny and hes arogant so... LOL XD well i hope you update soon and that you update running away soon too! like i said this is VER VERY GOOD! and amusing! lol
cant wait for more
love CHOCOLATE