for Two Cats10/20/2007 c1 MuzikalWriter
Ahh! It started out so innocently and then BAM! I was thinking, "Oh, this would be funny to read in my Creative Writing Worksh...oh. Nevermind."
Wow. Mean cat!
Nevertheless, I like it. One critique I have is that the transition from rhyming to non-rhyming was sudden and a little jarring. I'm not sure how you could fix that (I have problems with transitions myself) but that's the only problem I found.
Ahh! It started out so innocently and then BAM! I was thinking, "Oh, this would be funny to read in my Creative Writing Worksh...oh. Nevermind."
Wow. Mean cat!
Nevertheless, I like it. One critique I have is that the transition from rhyming to non-rhyming was sudden and a little jarring. I'm not sure how you could fix that (I have problems with transitions myself) but that's the only problem I found.
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