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8/4/2007 c1 32Beautiful Bones
I liked it. It had a nice rhyme to it, and it flowed pretty well. It's also long enough FOR a song, it's not like it's just a poem. The favorite part is the chours.^^

I'd have to give it a 3 of 5.

~Happy Writings!
8/4/2007 c1 13herpius derpius7
The line "It's all in fate's hands now / And I'm sure it wants us to die" is my favorite part of this.

It's nice, except I'm not quite sure what you mean when you say "since our eyes went bright".

Other than that, I like this.

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