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8/5/2007 c1 95Christy Leigh Stewart
This was sweet, very simple and nice. I hadn't ever read a story with a laundry theme before either~
8/5/2007 c1 6concerto49
Bold the title perhaps?

Could do with a touch of dialogue.

Some good imagery.

Need more on thoughts/feelings/emotions of persona.

Some of the sentences need more work on, but generally okay.

Anyhow. Cheers.

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