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3/10/2014 c2 4R. Ficst
I followed the link on your profile to read the story in its entirety. Absolutely loved it!
Great work with the characters, the world you built, and the overall plot. Great love story and adventure.
10/6/2012 c1 kat to the futur
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11/1/2010 c1 1Demeterr
I read your story on your blog, I rather liked it.
6/23/2010 c2 really
are you missing some thing for example a middle? not to be mean but it is quite confusing
3/8/2010 c1 3TheModernChromatic
You, my dear, drive me absolutely nuts. This is probably the best story I've read in years. It's truly phenomenal! Of all the books I've read, there are few that can top this story, and it's not even a book! (That's a subtle hint for you to publish this baby) Truly, I'm speechless, and that's totally rare for me.

Live long, write well,

With love, TheModernChromatic.
3/8/2010 c16 feilief
SUCH A GREAT STORY! i was not able to stop reading, finished it all in one day! You, my dear, are a very excellent writer, i enjoyed reading the way you wrote, and not a grammatical error in sight :D You should seriously consider publishing this. I could imagine this story made into a movie :D that would be so awesome! Hope for more stories to come from you!
2/18/2010 c16 3why-eye-en
This is a great story! I enjoyed reading it very much! Please keep on writing more. I am looking forward to reading your work =)
2/6/2010 c16 Turnip the Scintillating
An enchanting story, from start to finish! I knew that Riyka would end up being the Empress, but I never even considered the possibility that she was actually Ariella the whole time. I'm not often fooled so well - I was thinking she was some long lost cousin...

You managed to pull off one of the oldest cliches in the book smoothly and without fault, in my opinion. When dealing with something that could be considered a cliche, one either has to twist it to make it interesting and original, or make the characters and setting so interesting and original that it makes up for it. You've done both, creating a really entertaining story. I couldn't be happier reading the ending. I love a happy end. :)
1/24/2010 c15 SootyKiwi
I love the way Riyka and Demmi have formed a realtionship. They're so adorable together!
1/24/2010 c16 SootyKiwi
I think this is a really good start for your series. Though I haven't finished reading the series I am fully sure that the rest of the series will be extremely delightful to read!

WELL DONE!
1/18/2010 c16 Bee
To be honest, I'm a little bit speechless, so reiewing seems stupid, but I really just wanted to let you know how absolutely amazing I thought this story was.

It's one of those refreshing kinds of stories that reminds you why this site is actual good sometimes, even when there's so many other stories out there that aren't so good.

In short, I loved this. You're an amazing writer, you've created an absolutely amazing world and characters and plot so congratulations.

Thank you so much for the great read.
12/18/2009 c1 1runwayx23
Wow...can I just say that you are an amazingly gifted writer?

At first, I was completely convinced that Ariella was Riyika (I'm pretty sure I spelled her name wrong...), but then with all the different stories and twists you threw in there, I was sure they were two different people. After all, how could Ariella be in the castle if she wasn't in the castle? Haha. I was pleasantly surprised to be wrong.

I like the way the story flows as well. It's not too quick-paced with everything happening one thing after the other, but there's no dull moments either. It kept me hooked all night.

One thing I would suggest would be to tell more of what happened between Melosa and Demmi...I was a little confused as to why they're all buddy-buddy at the end. I can fill in the gaps, but it would be kind of nice to have a little explanation or something.

Anyway, I LOVE THIS STORY. One of the best I've ever read on this site. Thank you for writing such an entertaining piece of work.
10/30/2009 c16 Chocorange888
This story is so beautiful that I nearly cried. I really liked how t developed and te pace was perfect. Thank you so much.
10/8/2009 c16 ILAKOM
I loved this story! In fact I have loved everything I've read written by you!

I repeat that you should consider publishing your books!

=)
9/20/2009 c16 optimistic11
I completely spent my Sunday reading this instead of doing my homework. Thank you. x]

This story is amazing. BRAVO :D
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