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9/1/2007 c1 CandleQueen
Really liked the beginning, but it didn't seem to end with the same kinda spark. You intrigued me at first, but...anyways, I do really like your style of writing. :) *shrug*

-Ramen
8/30/2007 c1 44Alyosha Karamazov
Lovely. The beginning endeared me to continue reading because I too have had the same relationship with many a clock in my life. The "Someone dropped a tulip? Or someone attacked me, tried to beat me with a tulip and then ran, realizing what a horribly stupid plan it was." was really funny, it put a smile on my face and the ending was really nice, not rushed and very romantic. Nice job.
8/30/2007 c1 60xfail
I love how original this is! Your prose instantly drew me in, and every emotion and event was well done. Good job.
8/24/2007 c1 lymli
interesting, to be honest I liked the way you wrote "tulip" I don't know, my favorite part was when someone dropped a tulip to her. nice story.

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