for Forever8/7/2007 c1 
32Beautiful Bones
I liked the end two lines of the chours. I don't know why, but I just like the beat.
Sometimes, through the song, it felt like you were straining for rhyming words. Using whatever you could think of and throw it in. Think upon it. Can't think of anything logical, then save it and let it sit for a day, think about it. Then, come back and write/ type.
I give it a 3 of 5.
~Happy Writings!
32Beautiful BonesI liked the end two lines of the chours. I don't know why, but I just like the beat.
Sometimes, through the song, it felt like you were straining for rhyming words. Using whatever you could think of and throw it in. Think upon it. Can't think of anything logical, then save it and let it sit for a day, think about it. Then, come back and write/ type.
I give it a 3 of 5.
~Happy Writings!