for A Toast to Disillusions
310/15/2007 c2 tasi13
i feel bad for charlie but at the same time she needs to grow up, she is too old to be playing these games.
i feel bad for charlie but at the same time she needs to grow up, she is too old to be playing these games.
10/15/2007 c1 tasi13
I'm back! Sorry to have been gone for such a long time but I have been really busy. I like the story so far but just think you shoule have a better flow between switching charictars(you know what i mean) i found a hard time figuring out who was talking.
I'm back! Sorry to have been gone for such a long time but I have been really busy. I like the story so far but just think you shoule have a better flow between switching charictars(you know what i mean) i found a hard time figuring out who was talking.