for she walked on8/21/2007 c1 
16Spuriously-WoodsWorth
I seriously hope this was not about you. Just explain. I loved it, I always do, it was good imagery, and it made me think(as always).
16Spuriously-WoodsWorthI seriously hope this was not about you. Just explain. I loved it, I always do, it was good imagery, and it made me think(as always).
8/13/2007 c1 78Ironic Presence
Hmm... interesting. I've felt this way before.
I think it's good for a start-the story behind the poem is all there-but you can probably expand it some more in detail with some adjectives. You can sculpt a better emotion out of it. It has potential. ;)
Keep writing!
Ironic Presence
78Ironic PresenceHmm... interesting. I've felt this way before.
I think it's good for a start-the story behind the poem is all there-but you can probably expand it some more in detail with some adjectives. You can sculpt a better emotion out of it. It has potential. ;)
Keep writing!
Ironic Presence