for A Wish Your Heart Makes1/29/2008 c1 
47thyme and place
Well, it makes me giggle. Just a little. But, i have to say I liked the main character, she was crazed enough to let the story be what it needed to be. And of course the fact that she could be envisioned throwing number 2's around the room helps (of course, don't I know someone like that?). But the most striking thing about this entire story is definitley the characters, who were far more three-dimensional than my pitiful attempts at "full" characters (it went as well as my attempt at a "full" figure, just kidding). So, as 've reiterated, I think that this story works because of the characters, but you do seem to have the knack for characters, could i borrow it?
47thyme and placeWell, it makes me giggle. Just a little. But, i have to say I liked the main character, she was crazed enough to let the story be what it needed to be. And of course the fact that she could be envisioned throwing number 2's around the room helps (of course, don't I know someone like that?). But the most striking thing about this entire story is definitley the characters, who were far more three-dimensional than my pitiful attempts at "full" characters (it went as well as my attempt at a "full" figure, just kidding). So, as 've reiterated, I think that this story works because of the characters, but you do seem to have the knack for characters, could i borrow it?
8/17/2007 c1 24LOTRMS
Wow, what a really well-written story. The imagery was great and the characters were so real. The whole thing flowed very poetic-like.
Keep up the good work,
-LOTRMS
24LOTRMSWow, what a really well-written story. The imagery was great and the characters were so real. The whole thing flowed very poetic-like.
Keep up the good work,
-LOTRMS
8/8/2007 c1 1Jenabean
I never expected that ending. I don't like it because it is kinda open. I wish that she found out.
I asked my fifth hour teacher if she would kindly let me go visit the counselor. She of course agreed - she’s pretty timid, and she was afraid I would snap and start throwing number 2’s around the room and running in circles giving my classmates paper cuts with our homework assignment. I could see it in her eyes.
Awesome paragraph!
1JenabeanI never expected that ending. I don't like it because it is kinda open. I wish that she found out.
I asked my fifth hour teacher if she would kindly let me go visit the counselor. She of course agreed - she’s pretty timid, and she was afraid I would snap and start throwing number 2’s around the room and running in circles giving my classmates paper cuts with our homework assignment. I could see it in her eyes.
Awesome paragraph!