for The Like Letter11/30/2007 c1 pete's sake delete the account
You're so obviously an Inuyasha fan. It's great.
I like the premise, but I think the story would have even more possibilities and be even greater if you took it a ways away from being a fanfic. It's an awesome story already, but maybe you could experiment with making it less Inuyasha-y. Most of my big stories were inspired by something, and half started out as fanfics. Then...I don't know, I just made them my own. I'd like it if you made this even more yours.
Anyway, great work. I liked it.
You're so obviously an Inuyasha fan. It's great.
I like the premise, but I think the story would have even more possibilities and be even greater if you took it a ways away from being a fanfic. It's an awesome story already, but maybe you could experiment with making it less Inuyasha-y. Most of my big stories were inspired by something, and half started out as fanfics. Then...I don't know, I just made them my own. I'd like it if you made this even more yours.
Anyway, great work. I liked it.
11/26/2007 c1 
3Hearts To Rome
you wanted a review? you got it :)
i liked it, i really did. different variation of a cliche, but presented as a not. okay, that may of made no sense, but im saying the best friend cliche thingie was there, but it was presented as not being a cliche.
ahem. well... write more and i will hail them with smileys. :)
3Hearts To Romeyou wanted a review? you got it :)
i liked it, i really did. different variation of a cliche, but presented as a not. okay, that may of made no sense, but im saying the best friend cliche thingie was there, but it was presented as not being a cliche.
ahem. well... write more and i will hail them with smileys. :)
8/26/2007 c1 1Dameli
Despite the fact that the characters are very similar to those in Inuyasha, especially with the nicknames, I still think this is a great story
Keep writing :)
1DameliDespite the fact that the characters are very similar to those in Inuyasha, especially with the nicknames, I still think this is a great story
Keep writing :)