1/17/2009 c1 92burning in effigy
like the way this is kind of ramble-y and jumpy. it contributes to the effect of the poem.

really nice imagery and the "how much..." lines make this poem quite intense at the end

my favorite line has got to be "Police tape and love can be interchangeable like loving a rent-a-cop" clever :]

really good poem

(and thank you for your review from a while ago)