for Ghost of You8/11/2007 c1 
5Jinebiebe
I loved it. It was so sad. I love how poems help you understand things that you've never been through. I've never lost someone I loved, but certain poems and stories help me understand the feeling and your poem helps me understand. There are some people who will not try to understand what real poetry means because they only like the simplistic meanings. But real poetry is full of metaphors and emotions and I get that out of every poem I read of yours. Consider me as fan now. ^_^
Jinna
5JinebiebeI loved it. It was so sad. I love how poems help you understand things that you've never been through. I've never lost someone I loved, but certain poems and stories help me understand the feeling and your poem helps me understand. There are some people who will not try to understand what real poetry means because they only like the simplistic meanings. But real poetry is full of metaphors and emotions and I get that out of every poem I read of yours. Consider me as fan now. ^_^
Jinna
8/11/2007 c1 6concerto49
"But moves only foreword," - you mean forward?
I didn't really see the angst in it.
Could have been a touch more emotional and gripping.
It was rather cold and a little chilling.
Anyhow. Cheers.
6concerto49"But moves only foreword," - you mean forward?
I didn't really see the angst in it.
Could have been a touch more emotional and gripping.
It was rather cold and a little chilling.
Anyhow. Cheers.