
9/15/2007 c1
96Bonfire Of The Sanities
I don't know if it's what you were going for, but I read this and substituted "monsters" for the people we lable as bad without really understanding...very nice work:
PS Thanks for your review of "Sandcastle"
Peace,love,rock and roll:
Ben

I don't know if it's what you were going for, but I read this and substituted "monsters" for the people we lable as bad without really understanding...very nice work:
PS Thanks for your review of "Sandcastle"
Peace,love,rock and roll:
Ben
9/1/2007 c1
613DiaRose
Beautiful. A wonderful message, to tell us all to accept what is different. Beautiful.
Love,
~Dia

Beautiful. A wonderful message, to tell us all to accept what is different. Beautiful.
Love,
~Dia
8/11/2007 c1
3massattraction
I like it,
it has a nice rythym to it and it works really well
poor wee monsters:(
GOOD job, keep it up;)

I like it,
it has a nice rythym to it and it works really well
poor wee monsters:(
GOOD job, keep it up;)
8/11/2007 c1
5Jinebiebe
Another beautiful and elegant poem. You have so much talent. I love your writing style. I wish I was half as good as you. Heh. Again, good choice of words. I look forward to reading more of your good work.
Jinna

Another beautiful and elegant poem. You have so much talent. I love your writing style. I wish I was half as good as you. Heh. Again, good choice of words. I look forward to reading more of your good work.
Jinna
8/11/2007 c1
19Iced Tea Junkie
Your poetry is very unique. It stands alone on some higher level of consciousness and spirituality. I like how it sometimes flows, sometimes doesn't. It adds to the mystique.

Your poetry is very unique. It stands alone on some higher level of consciousness and spirituality. I like how it sometimes flows, sometimes doesn't. It adds to the mystique.