for In My Father's Shadow9/12/2009 c1 
5itsVKEE
that a/n made so much more sense; it took a while to figure out who everyone was. but then you did it all for me XD
haha
i love this. its so good. i just hope nothing happens as drmamtically as it did when Iz went to school XD
5itsVKEEthat a/n made so much more sense; it took a while to figure out who everyone was. but then you did it all for me XD
haha
i love this. its so good. i just hope nothing happens as drmamtically as it did when Iz went to school XD
9/10/2009 c26 CharlotteBradhadair
i loved it! this series is amazing! i felt so bad for Ally whenthey all abandoned her though!
charlotte
i loved it! this series is amazing! i felt so bad for Ally whenthey all abandoned her though!
charlotte
9/8/2009 c24 Hopeless Romantic90
You know, I have read many stories and this one has always gotten to me. Lord, if was Ally I would not have been so forgiving. She grow up with these guys and at a hit a trouble with there dad's they turn there back on her. Then expect her to take them back after apologizing! What load of bullshit! I say make them pay! As for Cole, well he should have known better and should have stuck by Ally! His step-sister needs to get a fucking life and not but into business that is not concern of hers! That's her step-father what he does, does not concern her. Money and shelter wise sure but when to comes dow to it, only Cole, and his step-mother matter. I just don't like his step-sister! Plus Cole has been her best friend since they were born and he he turns his back on her! Fuck that shit! She should have been like, "Go to fucking hell, and rot in it!" I know that's what I would have said. cause once that kind of trust is broken its not that simple to get back. And a few simple words, kisses, and touches should not have made a difference. Ally, did what I would have done. If i felt like i was being replaced (i know the feeling personally) hell yeah i would be a bitch if not queen fucking bitch! And another thing is that if someone said shit about my dad i would fucking put them in there goddamn place and then knock the down a few pegs!
Sorry I got really into this story and I was rooting for Ally the whole time.
Love the story, did a great job with it!
You know, I have read many stories and this one has always gotten to me. Lord, if was Ally I would not have been so forgiving. She grow up with these guys and at a hit a trouble with there dad's they turn there back on her. Then expect her to take them back after apologizing! What load of bullshit! I say make them pay! As for Cole, well he should have known better and should have stuck by Ally! His step-sister needs to get a fucking life and not but into business that is not concern of hers! That's her step-father what he does, does not concern her. Money and shelter wise sure but when to comes dow to it, only Cole, and his step-mother matter. I just don't like his step-sister! Plus Cole has been her best friend since they were born and he he turns his back on her! Fuck that shit! She should have been like, "Go to fucking hell, and rot in it!" I know that's what I would have said. cause once that kind of trust is broken its not that simple to get back. And a few simple words, kisses, and touches should not have made a difference. Ally, did what I would have done. If i felt like i was being replaced (i know the feeling personally) hell yeah i would be a bitch if not queen fucking bitch! And another thing is that if someone said shit about my dad i would fucking put them in there goddamn place and then knock the down a few pegs!
Sorry I got really into this story and I was rooting for Ally the whole time.
Love the story, did a great job with it!
9/1/2009 c22 leichan19
in all honesty, I think everyone except Ally is being stupid. I don't understand why it's such a huge deal that their dads are retiring. sheesh, don't they deserve it? it's not easy being a celebrity. and if they're pissed about it, they should confront their own fathers, not take out all their anger on their best friend. they're assuming way too much about Jake. so, for the most part...I hate everyone except Ally right now.
in all honesty, I think everyone except Ally is being stupid. I don't understand why it's such a huge deal that their dads are retiring. sheesh, don't they deserve it? it's not easy being a celebrity. and if they're pissed about it, they should confront their own fathers, not take out all their anger on their best friend. they're assuming way too much about Jake. so, for the most part...I hate everyone except Ally right now.
8/28/2009 c26 tehcow
that was cute ^^
i still think ally forgave them a bit too easily though but that might have been b/c she missed them so much...
that was cute ^^
i still think ally forgave them a bit too easily though but that might have been b/c she missed them so much...
8/15/2009 c2 3strawberrycrush
aww...i really like d name 'princess'...ve sum history wid d name...!...the story is interestin...!...I am so in love wid ur stories..
3strawberrycrushaww...i really like d name 'princess'...ve sum history wid d name...!...the story is interestin...!...I am so in love wid ur stories..
7/19/2009 c22 Summer Leah
Dude, that bitch Stephanie totally deserved it! I'm so glad for the character of Jenna. She's awesome, and without her it'd just be too depressing.
Dude, that bitch Stephanie totally deserved it! I'm so glad for the character of Jenna. She's awesome, and without her it'd just be too depressing.
7/19/2009 c13 Summer Leah
I just want you to know that it's five in the morning and I still haven't gotten to sleep yet. Thanks to YOU, I've been reading on my computer for hours on end. I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY.
...By which I mean, great stories! I love Phone Calls and all the sequels, particularly this one!
I just want you to know that it's five in the morning and I still haven't gotten to sleep yet. Thanks to YOU, I've been reading on my computer for hours on end. I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY.
...By which I mean, great stories! I love Phone Calls and all the sequels, particularly this one!
6/17/2009 c26 1LUVAB
Loved this story never actually reviewed before but had to after reading this! Hope you continue to write more it was really good.
1LUVABLoved this story never actually reviewed before but had to after reading this! Hope you continue to write more it was really good.
4/21/2009 c22 7gulistala
Okay what Steph said was uncalled for, the last bits! That was going too far, especially when she was trying to be the better person and deal with it properly. Steph is really starting to piss me off.
7gulistalaOkay what Steph said was uncalled for, the last bits! That was going too far, especially when she was trying to be the better person and deal with it properly. Steph is really starting to piss me off.
4/21/2009 c17 gulistala
Oh dear she's a little gealous, isn't she? While I can see where she's coming from, she needs to tone it down. Let's what's coming up next.
Oh dear she's a little gealous, isn't she? While I can see where she's coming from, she needs to tone it down. Let's what's coming up next.
4/21/2009 c8 gulistala
Is Stephenie, the soon to be stepsister, going to be trouble? Or is she going to fall for one of the other guys?
Is Stephenie, the soon to be stepsister, going to be trouble? Or is she going to fall for one of the other guys?