
8/13/2007 c1
1Shampa
Intrigue...I like the way you gave your characters life, even though I know so little of them, they feel real. Their reactions, their conversations, it works. I like that you put effort into your story: you did your homework aboutt Valerian Good job! Can't wait for more.

Intrigue...I like the way you gave your characters life, even though I know so little of them, they feel real. Their reactions, their conversations, it works. I like that you put effort into your story: you did your homework aboutt Valerian Good job! Can't wait for more.
8/13/2007 c1
3Venus Smurf1
Wow. I'm so very creeped out...can't imagine how she's feeling. Well done, though. This is an impressive piece of work, even for you. Can't wait for more!

Wow. I'm so very creeped out...can't imagine how she's feeling. Well done, though. This is an impressive piece of work, even for you. Can't wait for more!