for Just The Same8/31/2007 c1 
173sunshineofyourlife
Ok. I've read most of your recent work. And I like it all, but this is my favorite! So I'll comment on this one. I love it. It captures real life...and basically my current situation. I like the format a lot.
-Sunshine
173sunshineofyourlifeOk. I've read most of your recent work. And I like it all, but this is my favorite! So I'll comment on this one. I love it. It captures real life...and basically my current situation. I like the format a lot.
-Sunshine
8/15/2007 c1 jojoba-music-girl
As always, you used such an original way of writing! Though I have one comment: in your summary you said: 'I hate what you've became'. I think it should be: 'I hate what you've become'. Other than that: your poem is great, yet again!
As always, you used such an original way of writing! Though I have one comment: in your summary you said: 'I hate what you've became'. I think it should be: 'I hate what you've become'. Other than that: your poem is great, yet again!
8/15/2007 c1 7her portrait in black
wow..that was amazing i really liked it
espicially the last four lines :D
your a really good poet
7her portrait in blackwow..that was amazing i really liked it
espicially the last four lines :D
your a really good poet