8/15/2007 c1 49Toxic.Industrial.Waste
Wow. This was good. There are a few errors, though.

‘i can’t believe you though i loved you’,

I'm not sure if you meant 'thought' or not. But either way it works well.

'pour our'

I think you meant 'out'.

'until you feel air beneght your feet'

I think you meant beneath.

Still, good job.

^-^