for Land of Red II9/19/2009 c3 
1SpanishHazel14
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz keep writing im dying 2 know wat happens between cicario and aliana
1SpanishHazel14plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz keep writing im dying 2 know wat happens between cicario and aliana
8/27/2009 c3 Apocolips
PLEASE UPDATE!
PLEASE UPDATE!
8/23/2009 c3 1bballbabe
I love this story! I really wish that you will update it again! PLEASE I really do love it!
1bballbabeI love this story! I really wish that you will update it again! PLEASE I really do love it!
8/19/2009 c3 7adlerose
this sure looks promising but its sad that you havent updated in a year now...
7adlerosethis sure looks promising but its sad that you havent updated in a year now...
8/11/2009 c3 exhaustedparanoia
I read land of red and now this, couldnt stop reading. I like the story. Here is to hoping it will be updated soon. :)
I read land of red and now this, couldnt stop reading. I like the story. Here is to hoping it will be updated soon. :)
8/7/2009 c3 20groundhog591
This is really good. Though I see that you haven't updated in some time, I hope that you will soon! I really love the first story and hope that Cicario and Aliana can have a happy ending!
20groundhog591This is really good. Though I see that you haven't updated in some time, I hope that you will soon! I really love the first story and hope that Cicario and Aliana can have a happy ending!
7/22/2009 c3 1I blend in with snow
heyy!
i really really loved the first story that you wrote for this. it was amazing
you really need to update!
1I blend in with snowheyy!
i really really loved the first story that you wrote for this. it was amazing
you really need to update!
7/9/2009 c3 Blue-Eyed Chica
love it! ooh is she like the queens twin? caused thatd be cool, plus then they could get married (her and cicario)
love it! ooh is she like the queens twin? caused thatd be cool, plus then they could get married (her and cicario)
6/18/2009 c3 2Yggdrasil Oak
I have to tell you that I love this story... I just read Land of Red and was moved to tears. I enjoy your writing so much! I can't wait to see what happens in this story.
2Yggdrasil OakI have to tell you that I love this story... I just read Land of Red and was moved to tears. I enjoy your writing so much! I can't wait to see what happens in this story.
5/27/2009 c3 Sacred flower
It would be so cool that she were the chosen one, to be the wife for Cicario. I keep thinking that the simalarities between the actual Queen and Aliana are not a coincidence. They could have been sisters, but they were seperated somehow, making Aliana royalty as well, heck, she probably would have been the Queen if what I think is correct, but if its not, then it's not, but that does sound cool. They could have been seperated from someone who was greedy and wanted the younger sister to be queen so they got rid of Aliana, and when her royal highness had her babies she never found out that they were twins, or maybe one was stolen and then sold, and that one is Aliana, I don't know, but hey at least I'm being creative, and if you already have a plot then follow it, I will read your story till it is complete, since I loved the first one, but of not then feel free to use my ideas! Can't wait for an update.
P.S. I'm sorry that I didn't reveiew the first one much (1 review), but it was already complete, and I really wanted to finish, becaie it was so good, and I kept forgeting to review,since I wanted to get to the next chapter, but anyways I will review every chapter form this point on!)
It would be so cool that she were the chosen one, to be the wife for Cicario. I keep thinking that the simalarities between the actual Queen and Aliana are not a coincidence. They could have been sisters, but they were seperated somehow, making Aliana royalty as well, heck, she probably would have been the Queen if what I think is correct, but if its not, then it's not, but that does sound cool. They could have been seperated from someone who was greedy and wanted the younger sister to be queen so they got rid of Aliana, and when her royal highness had her babies she never found out that they were twins, or maybe one was stolen and then sold, and that one is Aliana, I don't know, but hey at least I'm being creative, and if you already have a plot then follow it, I will read your story till it is complete, since I loved the first one, but of not then feel free to use my ideas! Can't wait for an update.
P.S. I'm sorry that I didn't reveiew the first one much (1 review), but it was already complete, and I really wanted to finish, becaie it was so good, and I kept forgeting to review,since I wanted to get to the next chapter, but anyways I will review every chapter form this point on!)
5/18/2009 c3 Heather Feather
I read the first story, Land of the Red, and immediately had to read this.
Your characters are wonderful, your story interesting. But I would really love to hear more about the world that you have created- it sounds fascinating, but there isn't enough information to imagine a proper world!
I read the first story, Land of the Red, and immediately had to read this.
Your characters are wonderful, your story interesting. But I would really love to hear more about the world that you have created- it sounds fascinating, but there isn't enough information to imagine a proper world!