
8/8/2014 c3 sweetcheeks
Why hasnt this been updated or finished for that matter?this story is better than any story i have read so far. So please please give this story some life.
Why hasnt this been updated or finished for that matter?this story is better than any story i have read so far. So please please give this story some life.
6/20/2014 c3 elysha
I want morrrreeee!
I want morrrreeee!
2/7/2014 c1 calabria1292
You have written a story that inflamed my interest, characters that stole my heart, and the begining of a sequel filled with promise-and then you disappeared. If you ever return to fictionpress I hope you consider finishing this story!
You have written a story that inflamed my interest, characters that stole my heart, and the begining of a sequel filled with promise-and then you disappeared. If you ever return to fictionpress I hope you consider finishing this story!
11/25/2013 c3
1x Farii
It's been more than 5 years since you've updated your story but I stumbled upon this and it's prequel and finished it in one go! It's crazy to ask you to update now but I just wanted to let you know you've got a new fan and eager reader :)

It's been more than 5 years since you've updated your story but I stumbled upon this and it's prequel and finished it in one go! It's crazy to ask you to update now but I just wanted to let you know you've got a new fan and eager reader :)
8/30/2013 c3 InTheMoonLight01
5 years since the last update...Is this going to be continued or not...Ughh i just finished the first one and it would be awesome if you continue thiss 'coz it sounds interesting...Are you alive (i really hope you are lol)...I'm just joking but hey it could be possible ! :)
5 years since the last update...Is this going to be continued or not...Ughh i just finished the first one and it would be awesome if you continue thiss 'coz it sounds interesting...Are you alive (i really hope you are lol)...I'm just joking but hey it could be possible ! :)
6/23/2013 c3 Mazarine
This is such a good story an i loves the other thanks for allowing me to read it :) I hope one day you continue because your writing is fantastic :)
This is such a good story an i loves the other thanks for allowing me to read it :) I hope one day you continue because your writing is fantastic :)
5/25/2013 c3
9AKhwab
I think I know who that girl was. I think I know what that girl is supposed to do too. I also think I know who the girl will end up marrying. Anyway, I think this story is better than your first one. This seems more interesting and full of action.

I think I know who that girl was. I think I know what that girl is supposed to do too. I also think I know who the girl will end up marrying. Anyway, I think this story is better than your first one. This seems more interesting and full of action.
4/21/2013 c2
7The Latest Plague
So, i know this isnt going to be updated, but i rediscovered this story again and i thought i would share what i think will happen based on what i want to happen because i love aliana and cicario as a couple. So, taking everything written so far, I'm going to start with Aliana becoming the faux-queen. Aliana starts her lessons as queen because though she is educated, she is not up to date with the royal customs and behaviors the queen of Mait should know. During those weeks in the palace, she also learns that this queen is betrothed to Cicario and has been since birth. When she finally meets him they embrace in utter joy and Cicario reveals that he planned the switch all along with the queen because he knew the real queen longed to be free and live the life she wanted. He figured that it was a way to make them all happy. So, Aliana and Cicario get married, have babies and live their beautiful royal lives together. the end. Ignore all the holes in character and the fact that there is no real plot. I love a happy ending. lol

So, i know this isnt going to be updated, but i rediscovered this story again and i thought i would share what i think will happen based on what i want to happen because i love aliana and cicario as a couple. So, taking everything written so far, I'm going to start with Aliana becoming the faux-queen. Aliana starts her lessons as queen because though she is educated, she is not up to date with the royal customs and behaviors the queen of Mait should know. During those weeks in the palace, she also learns that this queen is betrothed to Cicario and has been since birth. When she finally meets him they embrace in utter joy and Cicario reveals that he planned the switch all along with the queen because he knew the real queen longed to be free and live the life she wanted. He figured that it was a way to make them all happy. So, Aliana and Cicario get married, have babies and live their beautiful royal lives together. the end. Ignore all the holes in character and the fact that there is no real plot. I love a happy ending. lol
3/28/2013 c3 weldergirl1995
I love it and I want to know what happens next. And I think I know who it was whoput allinia in the queen's place. Please please please update this!
I love it and I want to know what happens next. And I think I know who it was whoput allinia in the queen's place. Please please please update this!
11/3/2012 c1 Guest
I realised all your stories hv been updated years back, so I was just wondering if you've relocated somewhere else (under some other username). Anyways, pls pls update and do tell if you've relocated!
I realised all your stories hv been updated years back, so I was just wondering if you've relocated somewhere else (under some other username). Anyways, pls pls update and do tell if you've relocated!
11/3/2012 c3 Guest
It was wonderfully written until you stopped! Pls update! :)
It was wonderfully written until you stopped! Pls update! :)