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5/4/2008 c1 94AK the Twilight
This poem really leads you down a different road than other poems like it. It tends to show a negative approach to the heartbeat, but it still manages to make some good poetic techniques. There's plenty of good imagery and the whole poem tends to show negative emotions toward love. Very unique idea; just be careful near the beginning, because it tended to be a bit off-topic compared to the other stanzas, which show disdain towards the heartbeat.

Great job, overall.

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