for A Cupcake For You8/28/2007 c4 
5Hydrangea Syrup of DOOM
finally description. i liked this chapter a lot more than the rest. i liked how she keeps refering to them as her friends.
5Hydrangea Syrup of DOOMfinally description. i liked this chapter a lot more than the rest. i liked how she keeps refering to them as her friends.
8/25/2007 c4 Sophie Ulquiorra Allen
Hm, much better than the last. There is more development here, but there are still several spelling errors or dropped words. Anyway, keep at it! I'd like to see the rest of the chapters once they are edited as well.
Hm, much better than the last. There is more development here, but there are still several spelling errors or dropped words. Anyway, keep at it! I'd like to see the rest of the chapters once they are edited as well.
8/23/2007 c4 10Susannah Simon
i'm glad we got a little description this time! this one was cute. but how did she get from germany to cuba to russia to ...what country is she in now? al capone... was he in the mafia or something? i need to brush up on my history. a few little spelling errors in this one, but it's ok :D four years...man. that's a lot of cupcakes! how many does she give out each year? maybe you could mention that in the next chapter. maybe she's just a figment of these people's imaginations and this girl is what connects everyone in the world: dictator and mailman... idk. we'll see! great job.
10Susannah Simoni'm glad we got a little description this time! this one was cute. but how did she get from germany to cuba to russia to ...what country is she in now? al capone... was he in the mafia or something? i need to brush up on my history. a few little spelling errors in this one, but it's ok :D four years...man. that's a lot of cupcakes! how many does she give out each year? maybe you could mention that in the next chapter. maybe she's just a figment of these people's imaginations and this girl is what connects everyone in the world: dictator and mailman... idk. we'll see! great job.
8/23/2007 c3 Susannah Simon
aw! i love how naive she is. she's so adorable! i like how this one was longer. who IS this girl? maybe you could give us a description or something. and where'd she come from? i'm very curious about this story. i really like it so far. post soon! i'm excited to read more. -suze
aw! i love how naive she is. she's so adorable! i like how this one was longer. who IS this girl? maybe you could give us a description or something. and where'd she come from? i'm very curious about this story. i really like it so far. post soon! i'm excited to read more. -suze
8/23/2007 c2 Susannah Simon
aw i wish this one could have been longer like the one with Mr. Hitler. I like how you do the "Mr. Castro" and "Mr. Hitler". it makes it so...i don't know. it's a good idea. :D but "spanishing" i think you could have used "speaking rapid spanish" or something to that effect instead. but good so far. i'll keep clicking...
aw i wish this one could have been longer like the one with Mr. Hitler. I like how you do the "Mr. Castro" and "Mr. Hitler". it makes it so...i don't know. it's a good idea. :D but "spanishing" i think you could have used "speaking rapid spanish" or something to that effect instead. but good so far. i'll keep clicking...
8/23/2007 c1 Susannah Simon
aww i love how innocent this is. this was really cute. how old is this girl? she seems really young to me. aw i really like it so far! ok on to the next chapter.
aww i love how innocent this is. this was really cute. how old is this girl? she seems really young to me. aw i really like it so far! ok on to the next chapter.
8/18/2007 c3 5Hydrangea Syrup of DOOM
dammit just when the colours were actually pretty he just had to throw it away. i like how this one was more descriptive (or at least in my opinion it was) but i still like that these chapters are short (actually i love that and it makes everything so much easier to read). Anyway nice job and i hope you update soon.
5Hydrangea Syrup of DOOMdammit just when the colours were actually pretty he just had to throw it away. i like how this one was more descriptive (or at least in my opinion it was) but i still like that these chapters are short (actually i love that and it makes everything so much easier to read). Anyway nice job and i hope you update soon.
8/18/2007 c2 Hydrangea Syrup of DOOM
i forgot to write this in my last review. spanishing at someone? wtf? lol. and also Mr. Cuba Dictator Man? you're so werd sometimes. anyway back to this chapter. it was again good but you shouldn't speak in other languages unless you plan on translating because people won't understand what you're saying. no, i don't care that you don't care if people understand it or not i'm just saying that it would help. heil cupcake and see you tommarow (i'm going to review your next chapter first though).
i forgot to write this in my last review. spanishing at someone? wtf? lol. and also Mr. Cuba Dictator Man? you're so werd sometimes. anyway back to this chapter. it was again good but you shouldn't speak in other languages unless you plan on translating because people won't understand what you're saying. no, i don't care that you don't care if people understand it or not i'm just saying that it would help. heil cupcake and see you tommarow (i'm going to review your next chapter first though).
8/18/2007 c1 Hydrangea Syrup of DOOM
that was...odd. good but odd. um i think you should describe the girl more, you know give her a name and a reason for doing this.
that was...odd. good but odd. um i think you should describe the girl more, you know give her a name and a reason for doing this.
8/17/2007 c3 Sophie Ulquiorra Allen
Hm, this strikes me as something you're writing to relieve tension or to take a well-deserved break from your other work. Even if that is the case, please make it more interesting! :3 I mean, there is the possibility to really delve into the personalities of each of the dictators, and I'm surprised you haven't taken it yet, as I know that you really like learning about different people and exploring their personalities.
Haha, I'm being nitpicky. In any event, if you do continue with this, perhaps throw in a little Goebbels or Himmler or Bittrich for me?
Hm, this strikes me as something you're writing to relieve tension or to take a well-deserved break from your other work. Even if that is the case, please make it more interesting! :3 I mean, there is the possibility to really delve into the personalities of each of the dictators, and I'm surprised you haven't taken it yet, as I know that you really like learning about different people and exploring their personalities.
Haha, I'm being nitpicky. In any event, if you do continue with this, perhaps throw in a little Goebbels or Himmler or Bittrich for me?