for Lessons in Life & in Love7/24/2018 c18 Guest
This story was so sweet and adorable. Loved it :)
This story was so sweet and adorable. Loved it :)
6/13/2013 c2 displacedfemale
so if nothing else i can at least rest assured that my ability to read between the lines is still sharp.
The reunion which will undoubtedly happen is going to be beyond awkward, so much has happened and so much has changed. I think Tommy will be hurt that he's been kept in the dark about the child and then furious when he finds out that he's been a dad and had no knowledge of the fact!
Great chapter.
so if nothing else i can at least rest assured that my ability to read between the lines is still sharp.
The reunion which will undoubtedly happen is going to be beyond awkward, so much has happened and so much has changed. I think Tommy will be hurt that he's been kept in the dark about the child and then furious when he finds out that he's been a dad and had no knowledge of the fact!
Great chapter.
6/13/2013 c1 displacedfemale
So I love the whole "falling for your best friends brother or your brothers best friend" thing, I for some reason find them more relatable than other plots and I was super intrigued by this one as it's apparently not the "we're together" that causes the drama but him leaving, something which I've not yet come across.
The only thing i wasn't so keen on was Liv's reaction... she loves the guy right? so why is she so hurt that he's considering following his dreams? I mean sure I get that she'll miss him and may be worried that she'll lose him but he's not ditching her for a trip to KFC...
At this point I'm also going to predict that the crying little girl is Tommy's.
So I love the whole "falling for your best friends brother or your brothers best friend" thing, I for some reason find them more relatable than other plots and I was super intrigued by this one as it's apparently not the "we're together" that causes the drama but him leaving, something which I've not yet come across.
The only thing i wasn't so keen on was Liv's reaction... she loves the guy right? so why is she so hurt that he's considering following his dreams? I mean sure I get that she'll miss him and may be worried that she'll lose him but he's not ditching her for a trip to KFC...
At this point I'm also going to predict that the crying little girl is Tommy's.
8/30/2012 c18 heal me forever
fuck...kill me...dis is fucking AWESUM...fucking sexyyyyyy (: i fuck hate kyle...he is such an ass...petending dat he likes her:( my fav is TOmmy nd his relation wid his daughter ..dat part is more beautifully wriitten dan d rest..overall heart felt ...stry..just thing is...u showed,..dat lyle did not like him back..as in...dat who can she be ready ..to marry kyle...till tommy came..i felt hurt dat sec:( neverless bang on stry...read it in one go...TOMMY FORVER 333
fuck...kill me...dis is fucking AWESUM...fucking sexyyyyyy (: i fuck hate kyle...he is such an ass...petending dat he likes her:( my fav is TOmmy nd his relation wid his daughter ..dat part is more beautifully wriitten dan d rest..overall heart felt ...stry..just thing is...u showed,..dat lyle did not like him back..as in...dat who can she be ready ..to marry kyle...till tommy came..i felt hurt dat sec:( neverless bang on stry...read it in one go...TOMMY FORVER 333
8/16/2012 c18 Guest
wonderful story
wonderful story
5/19/2012 c18 
26PermanentNewGirl
absolutely amazing, don't normally read long stories on fiction press,but i LOVE this one
26PermanentNewGirlabsolutely amazing, don't normally read long stories on fiction press,but i LOVE this one
1/5/2012 c17 GwennyP89
Wow! This chapter had me bawling my eye's out!... =*) The part of Clair's birth brought back my own memories of My daughter birth! You captured the moment so perfectly and beautifully! and the airport scene OMG tearjerker...It was beautiful! I'm so happy with this story and this has now become one of my personal favorites. I love how you transferred from past to present and switched POV in every chapter...You wrote this so skillfully & if it ever becomes a book I'd buy...If it became a movie I'd watch it! Great Job!
Wow! This chapter had me bawling my eye's out!... =*) The part of Clair's birth brought back my own memories of My daughter birth! You captured the moment so perfectly and beautifully! and the airport scene OMG tearjerker...It was beautiful! I'm so happy with this story and this has now become one of my personal favorites. I love how you transferred from past to present and switched POV in every chapter...You wrote this so skillfully & if it ever becomes a book I'd buy...If it became a movie I'd watch it! Great Job!
6/23/2010 c1 kismet
i knew it!
i knew it!
5/24/2010 c1 enchantedx
I wanted to read a good, completed story. This one had it all! Exactly what I wanted to read.(It even have a teenage pregnancy, and I love those kind of stories, weird hehe) I really enjoyed it. You made it so real, I could practically see the characters in front of me.
Keep up the good work x
I wanted to read a good, completed story. This one had it all! Exactly what I wanted to read.(It even have a teenage pregnancy, and I love those kind of stories, weird hehe) I really enjoyed it. You made it so real, I could practically see the characters in front of me.
Keep up the good work x