for Clean Confused8/14/2012 c1 
2heyitsstupidme
I liked the one-shot, it was very well-written and cute :)
But how did Ian ask Ryan out without Ryan knowing it?
2heyitsstupidmeI liked the one-shot, it was very well-written and cute :)
But how did Ian ask Ryan out without Ryan knowing it?
12/11/2011 c1 4Cabriolle
I love it... This is actually the first one I read here in Fiction press. It's like really light and well written. I like the tense changing abruptly by the way, cos I do that too with my writings. I also hoped that there would be more details about the happy ending, cos it's like so delicious and I'm like I just wanted more of it! How they hugged, they kissed, or more of the romantic not necessarily adulterated stuff that's just such a sigh to read... :)
4CabriolleI love it... This is actually the first one I read here in Fiction press. It's like really light and well written. I like the tense changing abruptly by the way, cos I do that too with my writings. I also hoped that there would be more details about the happy ending, cos it's like so delicious and I'm like I just wanted more of it! How they hugged, they kissed, or more of the romantic not necessarily adulterated stuff that's just such a sigh to read... :)
8/13/2010 c1 Zia
Nice. Only confused about the 'I asked you out' part. Don't think I ever read it in the story so it makes it stunning to learn that Ian apparently asked Ryan out.
Nice. Only confused about the 'I asked you out' part. Don't think I ever read it in the story so it makes it stunning to learn that Ian apparently asked Ryan out.
6/7/2010 c1 huimei
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7/1/2009 c1 24Amethystars
Very nice oneshot. I could've a little more explaining on the whol "I asked you out" thing, but other than that it was bang on.
24AmethystarsVery nice oneshot. I could've a little more explaining on the whol "I asked you out" thing, but other than that it was bang on.
7/7/2008 c1 4MacKitty
hahaha, yeah, it's a bit rough-practice will take care of that. but other than that, it was cute. especially ian. the ending seriously cracked me up. :D i think my favorite part is when ryan's like 'you are such a brat.' but yeah, keep writing!
4MacKittyhahaha, yeah, it's a bit rough-practice will take care of that. but other than that, it was cute. especially ian. the ending seriously cracked me up. :D i think my favorite part is when ryan's like 'you are such a brat.' but yeah, keep writing!
6/3/2008 c1 4Amindaya
Great! I love the details about the show, and the way they misunderstood each other. And Michael totally pulled a Solomon there. Lovely story.
4AmindayaGreat! I love the details about the show, and the way they misunderstood each other. And Michael totally pulled a Solomon there. Lovely story.
2/4/2008 c1 Sobran
I have a weakness for hate2love plots. Your oneshot is so funny and cute! I read with a grin on my face the whole time. Nice job.
I have a weakness for hate2love plots. Your oneshot is so funny and cute! I read with a grin on my face the whole time. Nice job.