for One More For The Road8/20/2007 c1 twilight
I like this. It shows information instead of telling it, something many writers have trouble with. However, it seems almost like a character study. I think it would be better if you expand it a bit.
I like this. It shows information instead of telling it, something many writers have trouble with. However, it seems almost like a character study. I think it would be better if you expand it a bit.
8/20/2007 c1 Rachel
Wow how did you think of this? It's so good. Did you make up the lyrics yourself?
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Wow how did you think of this? It's so good. Did you make up the lyrics yourself?
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