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1/21/2016 c1 sereeese
v good
4/5/2009 c1 10LeLa London
wonderfully depressing. the rhymes worked and your descriptions were great.
10/3/2007 c1 T.H.E. Hero
Beautiful.

I ryhmed nicely, lovely in fact. Bravo. It is so wonderful. Words can't even say.

Arigoto.
9/8/2007 c1 Lotusxx
Hey, I love it. You definitely have writing talent.
8/21/2007 c1 33LightfootLee
Nice. I usually dont likie constant rhymes but this worked rather well. got a little choppy on the 6th line but it didnt hurt it to much so congrats, very good description on what its like to keep failing.

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