for Shattered Mirror1/21/2016 c1 sereeese
v good
v good
4/5/2009 c1 
10LeLa London
wonderfully depressing. the rhymes worked and your descriptions were great.
10LeLa Londonwonderfully depressing. the rhymes worked and your descriptions were great.
10/3/2007 c1 T.H.E. Hero
Beautiful.
I ryhmed nicely, lovely in fact. Bravo. It is so wonderful. Words can't even say.
Arigoto.
Beautiful.
I ryhmed nicely, lovely in fact. Bravo. It is so wonderful. Words can't even say.
Arigoto.
8/21/2007 c1 33LightfootLee
Nice. I usually dont likie constant rhymes but this worked rather well. got a little choppy on the 6th line but it didnt hurt it to much so congrats, very good description on what its like to keep failing.
33LightfootLeeNice. I usually dont likie constant rhymes but this worked rather well. got a little choppy on the 6th line but it didnt hurt it to much so congrats, very good description on what its like to keep failing.