for The Slave's Witches8/21/2007 c1 wandering-warrior
I thought Your story was very interesting. Where's the rest of it?
Anyways. I thought your main character needs a little work. I thought it was unrealistic that your character didn't care that the Masters were watching Him/Her. If I was a slave, and I was thinking about "rising above those with power," I'd want to keep it on the DL until I knew my plan would work.
That's just my opinion. I love how your character seems determined. Keep up with the story.
I thought Your story was very interesting. Where's the rest of it?
Anyways. I thought your main character needs a little work. I thought it was unrealistic that your character didn't care that the Masters were watching Him/Her. If I was a slave, and I was thinking about "rising above those with power," I'd want to keep it on the DL until I knew my plan would work.
That's just my opinion. I love how your character seems determined. Keep up with the story.