
8/22/2007 c1
13Elegant Raven
Short and sweet, and to the point! I like the last line, and I honestly think it's just me, but I feel it's just not ended yet. I think it's because of the fourth stanza. It rhymes well, but I feel like it's missing a line. Other than that, I enjoyed reading this. This poem really nails what courtesy has come to right on the head. The rhyming was well done as well. It flows nicely! Well done.

Short and sweet, and to the point! I like the last line, and I honestly think it's just me, but I feel it's just not ended yet. I think it's because of the fourth stanza. It rhymes well, but I feel like it's missing a line. Other than that, I enjoyed reading this. This poem really nails what courtesy has come to right on the head. The rhyming was well done as well. It flows nicely! Well done.