
10/14/2014 c9 WHAT
brandon is such an asshole. I was expecting more from him but it just fell short i guess. Such a douchebag, she was a bit too easy.
brandon is such an asshole. I was expecting more from him but it just fell short i guess. Such a douchebag, she was a bit too easy.
1/12/2012 c9 Krissa16
Great series! The two make a cute couple. I'm glad you didn't make Melissa say that she liked Brandon all this time and I'm glad that you didn't make Brandon say that he liked her all this time too . . because that would just be unrealistic. A few things though. I didn't think that Melissa was the best protagonist. In the beginning i felt that she only felt lust for Brandon, since she still likes him even though he's such a jerk to her. At least you didn't say she was in love with him! I also found her excessive self-pity before and during the homecoming really annoying. It was just too much for me. I'm glad that they got a happy ending though. :)
Great series! The two make a cute couple. I'm glad you didn't make Melissa say that she liked Brandon all this time and I'm glad that you didn't make Brandon say that he liked her all this time too . . because that would just be unrealistic. A few things though. I didn't think that Melissa was the best protagonist. In the beginning i felt that she only felt lust for Brandon, since she still likes him even though he's such a jerk to her. At least you didn't say she was in love with him! I also found her excessive self-pity before and during the homecoming really annoying. It was just too much for me. I'm glad that they got a happy ending though. :)
1/3/2010 c6 Ghamaian girl
Love this chapter. I just can't wait to know what will happen next.
Love this chapter. I just can't wait to know what will happen next.
9/15/2009 c9 DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402
i swear i always reread this work of art:D
great job
please continue writing _
i swear i always reread this work of art:D
great job
please continue writing _
8/15/2009 c9 XxSiennaxX
Loved your story. I'm just glad there was a happy ending, otherwise you would have had a very upset reader on your hands.
Wonderful story :)
Loved your story. I'm just glad there was a happy ending, otherwise you would have had a very upset reader on your hands.
Wonderful story :)
6/30/2009 c9
5RoseBriar32192
OMG! AWESOME STORY! I really liked it! I usually review all the chapters but I really needed to read this so I had to go ahead! I'm glad everything worked out in the end! - RoseBriar
(P.S. I only sign with RoseBriar when the book is AWESOME!)

OMG! AWESOME STORY! I really liked it! I usually review all the chapters but I really needed to read this so I had to go ahead! I'm glad everything worked out in the end! - RoseBriar
(P.S. I only sign with RoseBriar when the book is AWESOME!)
6/29/2009 c9 SootyKiwi
It was a really great story. Damn I hate that Kate. Just the thought of her makes me want to slap her senseless no offence.
It was a really great story. Damn I hate that Kate. Just the thought of her makes me want to slap her senseless no offence.