for Adopted Mafia4/14/2021 c1 lucia1156
The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
7/22/2008 c19 
24Ravina
I like it - it was different and sweet! I only wish it was longer, and more detailed, but whatever.
Looking forward to reading more!
- Rebekah
24RavinaI like it - it was different and sweet! I only wish it was longer, and more detailed, but whatever.
Looking forward to reading more!
- Rebekah
6/27/2008 c19 hopelessly-devoted-2-u
I abosolutely loved this story! I think its my fav. so far. You should write more stories like this one! Great work!
I abosolutely loved this story! I think its my fav. so far. You should write more stories like this one! Great work!
6/27/2008 c19 hopelessly-Devoted-2-U
I absolutely thoroughly loved this story of yours. My fav. so far i have got to say! you should write more like these! I loved the main characters. Continue your great work!
I absolutely thoroughly loved this story of yours. My fav. so far i have got to say! you should write more like these! I loved the main characters. Continue your great work!
6/7/2008 c4 iluvkittens
i love your story.i read it before on quizilla but when i found it here i read it again.it's really amazing:)
i love your story.i read it before on quizilla but when i found it here i read it again.it's really amazing:)
5/29/2008 c19 mbcrazychick2011
three words... I love it... the story is constructed in a way the has action romance, mystery .. everything. You wrote it at a belieable speed .. and i loved it.. You have alot of skills and i think that one day you can become a writer... no. im not kidding.. this particular story would sell a lot if it was published.
tata mb
three words... I love it... the story is constructed in a way the has action romance, mystery .. everything. You wrote it at a belieable speed .. and i loved it.. You have alot of skills and i think that one day you can become a writer... no. im not kidding.. this particular story would sell a lot if it was published.
tata mb
5/28/2008 c19 XO-Escape-With-The-Music-XO
I loved this story! I just finished it. I started reading it around 3:30ish and couldn't stop! Your a fantastic writer, i'm going to read more of your stories, for sure.
I loved this story! I just finished it. I started reading it around 3:30ish and couldn't stop! Your a fantastic writer, i'm going to read more of your stories, for sure.
3/8/2008 c19 atreyu love
aww, thats so cute!
i love Payton and tony.
but i really like damien and riley too :D haha.
aww, thats so cute!
i love Payton and tony.
but i really like damien and riley too :D haha.
3/7/2008 c13 atreyu love
aw, i love the story :)
and Riley and Damien.
theyre so cute!
haha. so whos the traitor? i wonder :P
aw, i love the story :)
and Riley and Damien.
theyre so cute!
haha. so whos the traitor? i wonder :P