
2/16/2008 c1
144chaos called creation
I really liked the first half of it, but you kind of lost me at the end. To be honest, i was hoping for something a bit more romantic!
Keep writing!

I really liked the first half of it, but you kind of lost me at the end. To be honest, i was hoping for something a bit more romantic!
Keep writing!
10/22/2007 c1
879Moondog Dozier
Interesting pattern and rhythm in this. I like the sound and how it collapses into itself. Very audible. Hope all is well with you. MD:77.

Interesting pattern and rhythm in this. I like the sound and how it collapses into itself. Very audible. Hope all is well with you. MD:77.