
6/16/2012 c1
14AnonymousLily
I enjoyed this- the contradiction but the truth underneath it too. If one attempts to follow the outcome, one is left with the first line- nice.

I enjoyed this- the contradiction but the truth underneath it too. If one attempts to follow the outcome, one is left with the first line- nice.
5/6/2012 c1 darkershadeofpale
Well. This is a contradiction in terms.
It's short and kind of pretty in a stark, bare sort of way.
The contradictions work well here, I think. It's interesting.
.darkershadeofpale
Well. This is a contradiction in terms.
It's short and kind of pretty in a stark, bare sort of way.
The contradictions work well here, I think. It's interesting.
.darkershadeofpale
10/9/2007 c1
20Twilight Starr
We all need little notes to ourselves sometimes.
Doubting and contradicting yourself isn't very good although most people do it a lot. Trusting yourself? Well, I hope we are able to do that sometimes. ^^
Great job!
~Twilight Starr~

We all need little notes to ourselves sometimes.
Doubting and contradicting yourself isn't very good although most people do it a lot. Trusting yourself? Well, I hope we are able to do that sometimes. ^^
Great job!
~Twilight Starr~
10/9/2007 c1
1Gemma Lovell
Cute in its realism. It's very to the point, but somehow you make the words beautiful. I like how you repeat "Yourself" on a seperate line. Great job!
~Gem

Cute in its realism. It's very to the point, but somehow you make the words beautiful. I like how you repeat "Yourself" on a seperate line. Great job!
~Gem