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11/4/2007 c1 332smile for the sunshine
I think this is simple and short but nice. I think more details would have made it a little nicer but it was good nonetheless.
10/1/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Good job.

~Twilight Starr~
8/26/2007 c1 13missboo13
It wasn't very strong for me. It sounded more like stating facts and then asking a question rather than a poem. But the idea was good.

-Miss Boo
8/26/2007 c1 2Lovebird
This is very cute! Your flow could use some work, but whose couldn't? I especially like the last stanza.
8/26/2007 c1 Queen of Dragonnor
Short, sweet, and to the point. Nice, I liked it. :)

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