for Ugly8/27/2007 c1 
56from beneath the bell jar
Wow that's depressing. The thing that comes to mind is "fall from grace". I like the line "paper blue hands" - great imagery. I also appreciated the way you didn't use any punctuation or capitalization - it seemed to fit here. Overall good piece.
Maybe you could check out my poem, "Endless" ?
56from beneath the bell jarWow that's depressing. The thing that comes to mind is "fall from grace". I like the line "paper blue hands" - great imagery. I also appreciated the way you didn't use any punctuation or capitalization - it seemed to fit here. Overall good piece.
Maybe you could check out my poem, "Endless" ?