
6/1/2001 c1 Mello
May I find the love that you so eloquently express in mere words about three little words "I love you". I agree that words do not say it all, but this is close :)
May I find the love that you so eloquently express in mere words about three little words "I love you". I agree that words do not say it all, but this is close :)
4/17/2001 c1
4Stelmaria
i'ts ok, not the best i have read, but still pretty good. keep it up with the great poems!

i'ts ok, not the best i have read, but still pretty good. keep it up with the great poems!
4/9/2001 c1
39Scribe Mozell
Oh, very nice. Few people realize how trite the words "I love you" ARE in the mouth of someone who uses them lightly. It really doesn't seem strong enough to encompass the sort of emotion you are trying to express here. I'm not sure English is capable of this. We need more qualifiers for 'love'.

Oh, very nice. Few people realize how trite the words "I love you" ARE in the mouth of someone who uses them lightly. It really doesn't seem strong enough to encompass the sort of emotion you are trying to express here. I'm not sure English is capable of this. We need more qualifiers for 'love'.