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12/10/2001 c1 Angered Sheep
Did I review this already? () If I didn't, it's great. nice job.
6/1/2001 c1 Mello
May I find the love that you so eloquently express in mere words about three little words "I love you". I agree that words do not say it all, but this is close :)
4/17/2001 c1 4Stelmaria
i'ts ok, not the best i have read, but still pretty good. keep it up with the great poems!
4/9/2001 c1 39Scribe Mozell
Oh, very nice. Few people realize how trite the words "I love you" ARE in the mouth of someone who uses them lightly. It really doesn't seem strong enough to encompass the sort of emotion you are trying to express here. I'm not sure English is capable of this. We need more qualifiers for 'love'.
3/31/2001 c1 47PM20
Wow, awesome poem...i love the emotion in your words.
3/30/2001 c1 19Stone Feather
This is a really good poem! I like it!
3/30/2001 c1 41Willum
That was excellent, SE (can I call you SE?). Like I said before, I don't usually read poetry, but the way you write it is the way that I'm more comfortable with. I think your "beloved" should feel very lucky that you could write such a thing for them.

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