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It's 2015 and I wish there was an update :(
It's 2015 and I wish there was an update :(
9/11/2009 c6 Yep it's still not Kira
Aviva? That reminds me of the Norwich Union adverts. (You weren't inspired by them, were you?)
I truly don't believe love can blossom from rape. The only reason why I read stories that include them is because of the writer's skill only.
That's a compliment, btw.
Aviva? That reminds me of the Norwich Union adverts. (You weren't inspired by them, were you?)
I truly don't believe love can blossom from rape. The only reason why I read stories that include them is because of the writer's skill only.
That's a compliment, btw.
9/11/2009 c3 Kira.then maybe not
Hey! I'm really offended! My name's Kira!
lol. I'm joshing. But although I do have me favorites in terms of names, I wouldn't go as far as to say I hated a particular one. I mean yikes. Wouldn't that be awkward if someone called Kira was actually reading this? She'd definitely hate you for sure. And I know you're a lovely lovely person underneath, so let's not give other people the wrong impression, shall we?
You write well. Enough for me to read up to this chapter anyway.
Hey! I'm really offended! My name's Kira!
lol. I'm joshing. But although I do have me favorites in terms of names, I wouldn't go as far as to say I hated a particular one. I mean yikes. Wouldn't that be awkward if someone called Kira was actually reading this? She'd definitely hate you for sure. And I know you're a lovely lovely person underneath, so let's not give other people the wrong impression, shall we?
You write well. Enough for me to read up to this chapter anyway.
3/28/2009 c6 
6demi.91
what a great story!
why must it stop at an exciting part!
i've never felt suck fear reading a story, which just proves how great your writing is. when Aviva/Kira's stomach dropped, mine did too. pleasse continue with this story it is great.
demi x
6demi.91what a great story!
why must it stop at an exciting part!
i've never felt suck fear reading a story, which just proves how great your writing is. when Aviva/Kira's stomach dropped, mine did too. pleasse continue with this story it is great.
demi x
3/31/2008 c6 3M.Bianca
good one! please post the next one soon!
by the way, in the first chapter you alternate a little between "I" and "she"
kitty
3M.Biancagood one! please post the next one soon!
by the way, in the first chapter you alternate a little between "I" and "she"
kitty
3/17/2008 c6 cyanidecandy
great stuff ! :)
although i am utterly confused. but i still enjoy reading up to where i'm at so far.
i'll read it again when i have the time hehe maybe i'll get it all.
just a tad slow today.
keep updating though !
i really love how ur so descriptive about everything too.
great stuff ! :)
although i am utterly confused. but i still enjoy reading up to where i'm at so far.
i'll read it again when i have the time hehe maybe i'll get it all.
just a tad slow today.
keep updating though !
i really love how ur so descriptive about everything too.
3/14/2008 c6 tobslytobby
This is really interesting story. i'm glad you're chapters are so long. although i noticed that Jerome's personality has kinda changed, but other than that i like it a lot. update soon please.
This is really interesting story. i'm glad you're chapters are so long. although i noticed that Jerome's personality has kinda changed, but other than that i like it a lot. update soon please.
3/14/2008 c6 g
welcome back, I was wondering where you had gone earlier this week. thanx for the update!
welcome back, I was wondering where you had gone earlier this week. thanx for the update!
3/14/2008 c6 layne
it's weird that you changed her name. really weird.
it's weird that you changed her name. really weird.
2/21/2008 c5 4January Skies
This is a very good story! The story line flows very nicely and I like Kira's personality. She isn't like most people make their characters, ones that fall in love right away and all that crap.
The twists are interesting and I cannot wait for you to continue!
4January SkiesThis is a very good story! The story line flows very nicely and I like Kira's personality. She isn't like most people make their characters, ones that fall in love right away and all that crap.
The twists are interesting and I cannot wait for you to continue!
1/5/2008 c5 angelina
I must say, at first I wasn't sure I was going to like your story, but it grew on me, and I turned out loving it. I really apreciate the "new" Jerome. It's not entirely out of charachter for him to be being nice. He has grown as a charachter scince we first "met" him.
I must say, at first I wasn't sure I was going to like your story, but it grew on me, and I turned out loving it. I really apreciate the "new" Jerome. It's not entirely out of charachter for him to be being nice. He has grown as a charachter scince we first "met" him.
12/26/2007 c1 Pipotchi
Ok, I like splits and everything but you seriously have GOT to update this story. I'm going throu withdrawals!
Ok, I like splits and everything but you seriously have GOT to update this story. I'm going throu withdrawals!
12/13/2007 c5 Pipotchi
Wow, I've just now read your story from start to current chapter. I have to say it's my new favorite! I love the depth and mystery of the characters. So please keep this going :)
Wow, I've just now read your story from start to current chapter. I have to say it's my new favorite! I love the depth and mystery of the characters. So please keep this going :)